That was sweet! It really had a Sailor Moon feel! D

Hello?chobits is my fav manga-it is so cool-i love your poem-it is like awesome dude-hey if i want to write just a story i made up out of my mind and put it online then where do i go? i write many of my own stories and i want to put them up here so i came asking for help-keep up the good work-have you ever made and ryming chobits poems?

Why is this in the FULL METAL ALCHEMIST caragory?

pretty pretty pretty poem!

This is really nice. It's one of the better Sailor Moon poems I have read here.

Kute. I'm not a fan of H/R I'm more a fan of Peruru and Rini. Helios is 2 old for Rini.

oh my god that was so sweet and i was totally unaware that you were the first person to write in the sailor moon section of fan fic and for this i salut you

This is so sweet! I love Helios & Chibi-Usa fics/poems.

I read this poem when it was first posted but for soem reason i didn't review it, so here is my review! I love how you captured the essense of Chibi Usa's mind. Her view towards her two best friends, Pluto and Saturn, was well written and and to the point. The way you described how Chibi Usa viewed Helios in her mind/dream was wonderful.

Very sweet and very good! Love it!

wow... that was awesome...

I really like the imagery. Good job.

Beautiful, simply beautiful. Very well written and thought out.

cute!

chibi moon grrl

Wow! I totally love it!