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Reviews for: Behind Those Doors
hikari-kasumi
2007-12-30 . chapter 1
i love this story, it's really great :D i love how the ending worked out, though i kinda predicted it...
anna15
2005-12-18 . chapter 1
Hi! hahaha I lovee it! please writee more yess(: hehehe i want to know what'll happen next! pleasee write more (:
devilicious-jo
2005-10-12 . chapter 1
aww...the HoroAnna part is so cute!! and the RenYoh was kind of unexpected...i thought ANNA was joining them for lunch... :P... great one-chot anyhow!! =D
SaiyanWarrior200
2005-07-31 . chapter 1
Bleah! I hate yaoi! But other than that good story. It's a good thing Anna didn't come with him after all.
Xbakiyalo
2005-07-26 . chapter 1
Nyah! Anna and Horo? That's such a sweet pairing, why haven't I thought of that before?! Anyway, you portrayed the gradual Anna-ness very well. I liked that way she told Horo her story, it sounded very realistic. The bit at the end with Yoh and Ren was a little weird. I dunno, it just seemed a little bit out of place, but I suppose it works. If I wrote this, I'd change it to '"HE LEFT ME FOR ANOTHER GIRL DAMMIT!"' and then make it Tamao. But still, this works. And it's a very clever story. Luff the title ^^
notnow
2005-07-25 . chapter 1
this makes me actually like an Anna and Horohoro pairing. It was a nice poignant portrayal. But Yoh showing up in the end as Ren's hubby kind threw the tone of the story off ...LOL, probably because I can't imagine Yoh being gay.
darkmidnightsky
2005-07-25 . chapter 1
Hehehe i love it good job. ^_^
December 05th
2005-07-25 . chapter 1
Why did u leave it as an cliffhanger huh? just when it was getting good update soon ^_^
BabyKaoru-Sama
2005-07-24 . chapter 1
OMG that was such a twist o.0 ... i louved it! please write more! i LOVE Anna and Horo horo fanfics ^^
Candyberry
2005-07-24 . chapter 1
That was a fun read...very nice! ^^
Hasuko
2005-07-24 . chapter 1
Oh. My. Gosh. I love this! Very sweet, indeed. I'm not just saying this because my favorite Mankin pairing was included, nor the fact that we're related. I liked the writing style since it seemed a bit different from your other fics.

Anna seemed a bit OOC at first, but who wouldn't need anger management after getting fired? After that, Anna expressed her feelings as I would expect. Anna's story was very heartbreaking (That's where Horo Horo comes in!), and Yoh just seemed to be the "bad guy" of the fic. The hinted YohRen-ness just felt... wrong, despite how much I absolutely love the pairing with all my heart. Overall, I really loved the story. I'm surprised you came up with it in such a short amount of time. I never would have been able to. Oh, and the title is pretty ingenious too.

You're on thin ice, young lady. *taps foot* I toldja I could've beta-ed it for you because I did, indeed, find a few miniscule errors. But surprisingly enough, not a hoard-load of them. So, Kudos much.

Oh, I would SO love it if you wrote a sequel, imouto-chan, even though everyone knows that most sequels tend to be disappointing. I think I love your HoroAnna fics best, no offense to the other pairings and fics. Those are great too. This fic /may/ just even topple AtaNuku. MAY.
Kya-san
2005-07-24 . chapter 1
As soon as Anna said Yoh eloped, I thought Tamao. But then when she said it was a dude, I thought Ren. lol XD I knew it. *huggles Horo* ~Kya
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