ah!
is that a clifie?

no!

terrif oneshot, but come on, is that a clifie?!?!?!?

I didnt think that you are writing fics becouse u didnt updata the mind trap. I love your fics!

this was good. i hope your going to right more for the mind trap to. !

Please continue. I like the pairing of Harry/Voldemort.

i like it
keep writing

spelled severus wrong. you keep spelling it Serveus instead of Severus

You've actually come up with the same theories as me only you have explained them far more eloquently than I ever shall. I love it!

I'm not very good at Beta'ing but I did notice you'd put serveus instead of Severus. I can check through for you though if you would like.

that fits in so well with the story it's scary!...

What an awesome twist to the ending of HBP. It'll be interesting to see what happens to Harry next... and maybe get an explanation as to why Dumbledore wanted Snape to kill him?? Hope to see an update soon. Happy writing.

Good drama, I had to unclench my jaw afterward.

Quite a well written story! Can't wait till your next chapter!

Thanks for this. I'm one of the few that are supremely *hoping* that Snape didn't just kill Dumbledore because he was a bastard. This story made me *feel* better. Very nicely done and I hope you update.

*jaw drops open* WOW! Hey, you are good!! One thing I don't understand though - if Voldemort knew that Snape had taken the Unbreakable Vow with Dumbledore, why keep him alive once Dumbledore was dead? Slightly confused about that - but VERY good! Now get writing on original stuff! ;)