aw; terribly sad mate, but I liked it.

-haleyXsparrow-

sweet.

is it going to be a story? cuz its a shame its been left hanging...

this is so good! please write more, this could go somewhere nice.

oh the possibilities

loved it

Oh- Poor Elizabeth..But good story :)

i love this...the possibilities are endless :)

definitley more jack elizabeth action maybe some will 2 but ya awesome story so far

i really hope you plan on updating this soon. intriguing. i've always been a big Jack/Elizabeth fan, and this is exactly the type of thing i like. just..dont make Will suffer too much, k? i luv it! please update soon!

Wow! That was really good, but really sad at the same time. Poor Will :( Nice writing! You really got the emotions across :)

I've always wondered what it would have been like if she and Jack had gotten together. I mean, Will is such a dork. Then again I dislike Orlando Bloom... so maybe it's not his fault... But Jack's so much cooler!