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maryd 10/7/01 . chapter 9
Aw, this was so sweet, the best chapter yet! I like the way you brought them together and portrayed the tender, loving side of Touma (detached and aloof? Ha!) and the last scene (in his bed, right?) was very tastefully done. I don't see why Touma would stay w/ that jerk of a roommate when he's got his own apartment and car, and this still doesn't explain why they named their daughter Kayura-oh, how sad he must have been when Kayura ended it! Poor Touma!-but I wonder what Nariko was thinking when they named their baby. BUT I LOVE this chapter-it was nice to know one of the Troopers besides Ryo had a happy marriage. After Shu's and Shin's chapters, this bright spot was needed. Please get on w/ the story!
Wildfire's Flame 9/19/01 . chapter 1
Ooooh. Me like it very much. Totally cool ficcie. I can't wait to read more of it but it be late. I will try to read more tomorrow. Ja!
Arwyn D 7/21/01 . chapter 8
*repeats in a low monotone* You will work on the next chapter.
Red 5/4/01 . chapter 7
Hmm, I always knew prom queens were evil vile things *g* Just kiddin'...more or less _ Post more soon.
Arwyn D 4/28/01 . chapter 6
(Hey watch it sucker...*glares at Okami-chan for her crack in the author's jibber section*)Great chapter...so when do we get to met the dark figure?
Red 4/27/01 . chapter 6
Wow. Post more soon, I'm hooked.
R 4/14/01 . chapter 1
Okami-chan...*glomps*...love the fic, must write more...*cracks the whip*...err never mind...
maryd 4/13/01 . chapter 4
It's tantalizing so far, but you've got a LOT of explaining to do, it's a little unsettling. Just who is exactly after the new armors and why? Why are they killing the boys' families and children? Why did Byakuen kill Lady Kayura? WHAT possessed Touma to name his firstborn (and only?) child Kayura? Please write some more, if only to answer the questions. But otherwise, I was hooked.
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