Really good. Dreamy and sad. I could just cry for poor Yuki.

NEVER! NEVER EVER! YUKI IS A BASTARD AND I HATE HIM! HARU RULEZ MY WORLD!

Not only do you write a nasty Envy, but Yuki x Haru, too? *tears up* I think I could love you for that, no matter how tragic it is.

Such a sad fic, but completely in keeping with how the Juunishi tend to treat relationships between each other, evidenced by Rin and Hiro's actions. >.< Personally, I'm not sure Haru WOULD react that violently towards Yuki. I rather think he might understand. Then again, no one means as much to Haru as Yuki does, so who knows what he'd do if he was outright rejected like that?

Short but beautiful. Still so so short, like this review :)

I quite liked. *hands you a cookie* It was well-written, almost poetic.

Wow! xD I liked this one. Akito scares me ;-; XD but Yuki and Haru are luff. espcially together xD

i'm a little confused... i know what theywere doing, but i don't get it... it would be nice if this wasn't just a one-shot, but it's your fic. whatever.

Hm...I can probably guess what they were doing the first couple of lines ^_^ XD hehehehe. Keep going! I want to see more Yuki and Haru action! They so belong together! Bye ^_^!