SO AWESOME!^-^ You're fanfiction is really, really good! I hope you'll once write an long Avatar-fanfic instead of a one-shot. Not to be complaining o.0 I loved it! And that's why I don't want it to end >.

Very Good

This was an interesting drabble about Zuko. I wouldn't love my father either if he'd banished me.

And the boats are made of metal. Not wood.

-cough- short =p but good short...Zuko's so cool lol, great job on interpreting him ^_^ Keep it up

Hmm, I like some of the metaphors you use!
I wouldn't care too much about my father in that circumstance either.
To be fair, the reason I was beta-reading at 1:00 in the morning was because it took me 3 to 4 days to get to it since I'd forgotten it was there. *cringes*
Guess what! I got a comfy mushroom chair for my dorm room! I also got 2 sapphire/medium blue pillows with goldish tassels on 'em. ^^ Viva Walmart!

Great story!

Lovely story, you have.
At first I didn't have high expectations for it because of the word count (yeah, I'm sometimes low like that), but you certainly proved me wrong. ^ ^
Summary was great. And you also started your one-shot excellently, capturing my attention in the first paragraph. And your fanfic was rather original, too. No pairings and no meaningless angst. Just Zuko. Being Zuko. With the added depth of course, to make your story really good.
I loved your style; it's smooth and simple. It goes along great with Zuko and his thoughts, and I can't believe how much grasp you have on the firebender's character. Talented writer, you are~
There were a few spelling errors, but that can be easily corrected. Besides that, nothing. It's a short and meaningful one-shot.
Great Job

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I wanted to give you a long review, either with critique or applause, but at the end, I don't think I could say another word besides, "wow". Because, really, this was a beautiful piece, and you've done an awesome job of exploring Zuko's thoughts! (and Zuko *is* a complicated character - I think that's why some people like him so much. well, that's the reason why he's my fav. at least. *shrug*) All in all, that is one of the best one shots I've read and I take my hat off to you, rougehobbit! :)