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| kieran 2008-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abusewrite another page really need to see what happens neaxt |
| Angel-of-vampires 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! That was so sad! I love Charmer and Ranger! |
| Allan pike 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseanother chapter! (Please have it pupilsed by yesterday thank you :) |
| MichealsProperty 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abusewow gimmie more more i tell you more. god that waz awsome i want more d* it . ur lucky i read this im an Harry Potter f.f. reader so give me more |
| crystalswirl 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abusePretty angsty fic. Love it though. Please, please can you make another chappie. Pwease. Continue with the story. Good job. |
| wolfeeee 2005-10-28 ch 1, | abusewow! I remember AOFW! I LOOVED IT!! Yeah, thinking about what if she knew him before the whole Dreamer incident... yeah... DO UPDATE!! ^^ ~icewolf9 (17.04) |
| cherrichik 2005-10-21 ch 1, | abuseAH! KEEP WRITING!! this is so not a good one shot. more chapters!! more chapters!! i wanna see them make up!! |
| Blackthorn89 2005-08-27 ch 1, | abusePlease put in more chapters! It's really good! I used to watch Animals of Farthing Wood when I was younger... I miss watching it! Plz make more chapters! |
| Youkomon 2005-07-27 ch 1, | abuse(wide eyes) I actually never thought of what would happen if Charmer had known Ranger before her sister was killed...I thought it was nice that you put a lot of fire and spit into her anger. It certainly made the situation more realistic and the mantra at the end showed that it took a great deal of effort on her part to actally turn away from him after her setting of her verbal volley of hate.A very thoughtful touch. I also thought you were quite right to end the fic after her emotional collespe as it makes the reader feel even more distressed seeing how much pain her actions have not only caused Ranger, but herself as well. All in all, well written. Oh, and I think this stands perfectally fine as a one-shot, prehaps taking place in an alternate universe or something, based on it's originality. |