update soon.

O! i like it! going to be slash?

I LIKE THIS STORY ITS REALLY KEWL KEEP UPDATING

Actually I think you did the early Chilton Paris very well. There is only one thing, that also in your tomato-story came to my mind. I have the impression you are letting Paris use the word fucking a bit to often. (Is she really speaking this way in Englisch?)

Now I would like to read something about the Yale Paris. Maybe her thoughts about Asher or so. Or about the kiss in Florida. (I've heard there was one.)

You have a gift for Paris. This again was awesome. Congrats! You made it to my favorites list! :)

Wow that was so good! Seemed very true to Paris' character - her thought process and how she had everything in her journal. Don't worry about toning down the cussing. I think it would make it seem less realistic if you did.

I really like this story. It offers a refreshing perspective and shows Paris in a realistic light.

I really like it! i dont think the cursing is too much because it is ehr diary and she should be able to take out her emotions in it. It is very realistic, keep writing please!

Yes, all of us intelligent peoples of the world reek at PE...but hey, you get used to it after a while. Okay fic.

I really have enjoyed this journal! Paris could be found in every insult and even the way it's signed off with her initials. The only thing I would recommend is to pay REALLY close attention to grammer. Little things too, because she seems like the type who would write a journal as if it were a book report for her Literature class. I really enjoy Paris on the show, so I'm loving these entries. There needs to be more Paris fanfic anyway.

Wow, that was so in character! I don't think I could write something nearly that close to Paris's character. I would love to see another part to it.

Oops glittergirl, thanks for noticing that, I can't believe I slipped up on the Jacob part! I changed his name from Josh and updated the story after I learned his name wasn't Josh after I rewatched "Rory's Dance". I will change the story to reflect he does have a girlfriend right away!

Awesome! You have to write more... loved the perception of Paris' part...Just one thing I didn't get.. at first you said Jacob didn't have a girlfriend then Paris started yelling about his girlfriend. Other than that, you did a great job! I'm waiting for the next chapter!

Wonderful! This is coming along great! I love the whole Paris POV, there aren't many stories about her out there that are this great! Please write more soon!

that had alot of detail and very nicely written