yay this is also so gud!
i love it!
the one chapter was a lil guh-ross xD
i dun mind gross stuff (blood n stuff)
but tht kinda thing gave me a lil tummy ache
haha xD
anywho...*british accent* tis a lovely story. and i find it very delightful.
aha yeh its gud!
please write more soon!

i have to say that this storu is very intersting, and quite confusing at times, but i like it! you should really write more soon. please...

please update

*laughs* BURPING! SOO KAWAII!

Kimiru: -_-;;

Me: ...You've officially mortified Kimiru. ^_^;; UPDATE SOON, PLZ!

Aw, that's so cute. For a guy that's not so hungry, he can sure eat a lot! LOL. Great chap. update soon!

nice story.. poor lieren.. she doesn't have a nice past.. also, since you asked, i don't see where you're going with this.. heeh.. maybe i didn't read the story that well.. anyway.. hope you'll update soon!

-flamescythe

*shivers* Evil mother again...UPDATE SOON, PLZ!

Nice chapter Kyshin. Please update soon!

Very good! I'm glad you updated. I'm a little slow, okay, a lot slow, on updating because of my schedule. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

THESE CHAPTERS ARE SO SHORT!

Kimiru: ...

Me: UPDATE SOON, PLZ!

Sweet! You Updated great job. Loved it. ^_^

...

Kimiru: ...

Me: ...Lieren's playing hard-to-get again. UPDATE SOON, PLZ!

that was good just make them longer, but i like it that u are updating alot.

Please update soon! I can take alot of grossness.

Not TOO gross--like you said, Yami's too much of a gentleman--but you COULD get away with amking things very bad, seeing as how it's rated M...

Kimiru: -_-; Three, two, one--

Me: ZOMGWTF?!?! IT'S RATED M?!?!?! OMG, I never even noticed that! Huh...oh well. UPDATE SOON, PLZ!