i didn't think it sucked. it was very cute! .

I dont think it sucked at all! I really liked it! Good job!

Very well writen. Keep it up!

AW SO CUTE! if u think this story sucked im really excited to see what ur "good" stories are

It was cute. It didn't suck at all.

aww cute...INU LOOKS SO CUTE WHEN HE'S A PUPPY!

ahh how cute u are going to continue it right? Right? please any ways if u do continue which i hope you do can you make hojo and inuyasha have i fight i love to see the honyou beat up hojo its like the best part in a story to me muahahahahahaha lol any ways love it so please continue it. yay

Well done. The story was really cute, and I hope you make more like these.

i thought it was adorable!

This was a really sweet story. It didn't suck at all! At least I didn't think so!

This was anything but sucky. Keep writng stories!

fluffy...but still cute! :)

i love this oneshot! very romantic!

First it did NOT suck! It seemed a little forced though, like a image of someone's face in your mind's eye that isn't quite clear, that's all...

Keep up the great work! I look forward to your future works.