FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| evilive 2008-03-02 ch 1,  | abuseDon't give up on this story! You're the only one who actually wrote about the book After! I admit, it was a little weird with the whole Tom and Becca thing, but please just keep going! Oh, and if you can, please bring back Silas and Avery. They were awesome and I missed them when they "left." Thanks for the story and don't give up! |
| sweetseptemberswimmer 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseAfter was such a good book that really showed an insight into some parts of actual society. The way you wrote that first chapter really made it seem like you were writing a sequel to after. Dude, I'm serious. You gotta write more! |
| Inumaru12 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI was so wrapped up in this book, it was really good and it made me sad when i finished it. This is really well done too. Way to go. |
| Dystopian Pancake 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome! You have GOT to write more, man. It's really cool. |
| .Smart.Ass.Punk. 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! |
| Shadowfury21 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseGood chapter, I hope that you update soon. |
| Unit 1860 2006-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought it was pretty good, though I think the issue with the police officer could have been done better. Also, if you are planning on writing more, try reading it over thuroughly or getting a beta. Otherwise, good job. Please continue writing. |
| Kiyera 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abuseis that going to be it? i love it! it sounded like something that Francine Prose would have written in like a sequel or something! |
| cat 2006-02-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot exactly the best beggining I've ever read. But I think you have the only fic here thats atchually 'based' on the 'book'. So I'll keep reading. Make me proud. |
| Tessie 2006-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseGOD! I just finished After and well I want answers. Is Silas dead, what about Avery? Oh ya, kudos (u seem 2 like that word)on the ending, very interesting, but what a kind a parent would let their kids sleep in the same bed all alone in a room when they were dating. That sentace was kind of a run-on. But hurry up and start writting more! Tessie Gillespie |
| Theories Of Chaos 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseNice. Keep it up! |
| Unit 1860 2005-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery Good. Hope you update soon. |
| elephantsrocmysox 2005-08-06 ch 1, | abuseOMG THIS IS SO GOOD! KEEP UPD8ING! |
| disaffectedHSstudent 2005-08-06 ch 1, | abusei liked it, though it was a bit on the cheesy side, its a good idea. though i seriously doubt a cop would jsut 'oh yeah i believe you, have a nice day' atleast with that story. and can a guidence counselor from high school seriously set out a warrant? i dotn remember whether or not they did in the book but it seems a little out there. anywyaz, good luck with this |
| angeltears3 2005-08-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseYour sick. |