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Reviews for: The Payment
yuki-tenshee
2006-08-01 . chapter 1
are you going to continue?
Crysania Fay
2006-02-06 . chapter 1
Now that's a nice twist on things. Though I like to think that Akabane is in his 20s or so. But I guess that they never say, so who knows...
garotte
2005-12-03 . chapter 1
*in awe* Amazing! Your writing is beautiful and the idea was Fantastic. Totally original. I suppose it was meant to be a one-shot, but it would be amazing if you continued. *is very hopeful*
CyborgRockStar
2005-09-12 . chapter 1
ne, this is very interesting, and very possible in gb...great job.
have a nice day
Triss SkyLark
2005-08-22 . chapter 1
Oh Interesting i look forward to more. yes i very eagerly look forward to more!
blkwingangel
2005-08-17 . chapter 1
you've gotten me curious as to 'what' the payment will be. i hope you will decide to update this fic soon!!
Prozacfairy
2005-08-03 . chapter 1
Uh-oh, poor Ginji!!
Rami
2005-07-30 . chapter 1
Oh, very nice indeed. *claps* Very well-written and original in terms of GB fanfiction. ^^ Great work.
Dr. Lucia Faust
2005-07-29 . chapter 1
I must say this story was very interesting. The ideas you've written are very good. I can't wait to read more of your work. Good job.

Sincerely,
Dr. Faust
Atropos' Knife
2005-07-27 . chapter 1
Whoa! Very, VERY interesting speculation you've implied here and not at all implausible in light of current events happening in the last manga arc. Fantastic! ^^V

Just a question, if sixteen years had passed since Ginji was kidnapped from his mother and considering he's 18-19 at the time of IL, then that would make him around 2 or 3 when he was brought to Babylon City? But he seems to be described as a lot younger than that as he was taken away by Akabane.

Anyway, I LOVE the idea you presented in this fic. The last line is SO fitting.

Cheers!
Rabid Lola
2005-07-27 . chapter 1
...waw.

That was so cool. ^_^ A plausible theory. Seeing as we have no idea how old Akabane is...but then, he could very well be Paul's age or only a bit older. :)

The last lines rocked. ^_^ Go Tastywheat!
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