Wow, I'm actually quite impressed with this fic of yours! I thought the overall theme behind the plot was fantastic and the characters were portrayed very well since they seemed to stay pretty true to their game counterparts. That's a problem I have with some of the other fics in this section, honestly, since some of the characters are not very true to their original counterparts and seem to be written out of character at times. But...then again, the characters in this game really didn't have THAT much depth to begin with, so I guess it's all a matter of taste. But based on the descriptions you had of each character in the beginning of the story I'd say that's probably close to how they really would be in a JSR game. I personally didn't mind the swearing too much because the words fit where they needed to in certain situations. Not to say that I'm ok with that kind of language ALL the time...I don't like it when swear words are forced or used too often, but in your case they didn't seem forced at all, so it's not that big of a deal to me.

Usually I'll give constructive criticism in this part of the review, but I honestly saw nothing that could be improved here. I don't want to sound like one of those broken record reviewers or anything, but you're really a great writer and I'd love to see some more Jet Set Radio fics from you sometime! I guess the only advice I could give you for future stories would be to come up with well-planned plots, give the characters a bit more character development and try to stay true to the whole wacky, cool and humorous feeling that the JSR series is known for. Keep up the good work! *will add to faves on old account*

This fic was awesome...good thing they stayed in Tokyo-To, but I understand what Combo was feelin'... _ Awesome.

Wow! This is such an excellent story! You're an excellent writer and should keep on doing the thing you do best! Write good stories! :-D ((At least I think so!))

Very good fic, "Improvise" end was erm...corny heh, but excellent nonetheless

Tee hee hee... Buggers, bloody, mum, smeg... English lingo! I likes! Good plot... Hello Kitty logos! And its about time someone didnt write Mew to be a ditz! Keep up the good work! ...bugger... heeheeheee! .

...I will finish the original after I finish the revised one...This was kinda funny, you have a crush on Mew doncha?

Ok, you asked for it - criticisms - well, no serious ones, sometimes the swearing is a bit annoying but that's just me, and Onishima is - uh - strange, yeah. raves - I love Piranha's Women's Lib views and the Serpent Blades - I'd like to see them developed more! Death threats - nope, not yet - ditto offers of money! Knowing how you feel about Mew I expected her to be more unlikeable but I think she's actually ok! (You've converted me...) Oh, and as to the Grindhippyness, it takes some getting used to, but you write it ok. (oh geez, I've rambled on again...sorry...)

That was a great story! Loved it! My next story will be out when I acutally get off my lazy butt and write it! BTW, I thinkg Noise Tank should finish off the original "Memories Of Graffiti" too. I must know what happens!

How does Prof. K do that anyway? Cool story! I'm glad Combo and Cube stayed!