Aw. Yeah, I wish it was longer, but still. \ It was cute. I love it.

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I just noticed there weren't thirty chapters, but twenty. NO! Only five more chapters left? How could you do this to me? How could you?

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Oh no! So sad! You're tearing me, you're tearing me, here! ((I need a bandaid!)) HEIJI! ;-;

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Aw. I loved how you dissappointed her. ((Not to be mean)) But, that's why we love Kazuha so much. Aw...

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"Hattori Heiji!" She found that using his full name had more of an effect. "I swear to god, if you don't march over here and kiss me now, I'll punch your brains out!"

OMIGOSH! Such a good chapter! I was awed the whole time. XD

Dude, you're just so good at this... *jealous*

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Man, I love this on/off thing that makes it really good, even though, no matter how much they fight, they end up being friends again, and maybe more... 0

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That was so sweet. ] I'm a sucker for your fanfiction. You know all the right moves. P ((Good thing))

Keep it up... *sniffle*

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Oh my GODDESS that was good! And to think, I'm lucky enough to read twenty-one more chapters! I LOVE YOUR WRITING!

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Aww... Heiji. *_* Swety.

Sorry I couldn't say more.

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I loved how Heiji gives her a friendly kiss, but when he goes to give it to her, he probably feels more than that. Love it.

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It's so sweet. I love how they're so close, but they're both too embarrassed to get that much closer...

Keep it up, I LOVE IT.

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It's short, and sweet, and perfect. Just perfect. That's it... Make it build up slowly. ]

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I LOVED it! I love you for making it! ((Awkward moment)) I loved the fact they make it so obvious, yet they hide it. It's not just "OH I LOVE YOU!" and stuff. XD

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Short, but cute. Gotta love Heiji/Kazuha. Well written. Not much more to say, here.

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Aw, it's so cute! I like how it's not so obvious. It's so cute... aw... I have to read more...

You're good at this. .

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