Please update soon.Thank you.

I love this story! Please continue, it's getting really interesting! :)

Huh, This is a plot I'd like to see continued if possible.. Good writing.

wow this one of the few intriguing and very suspenseful story. keep it coming.

Three words.

Get. Longer. Chapters.

I like this. its interesting.

Pretty good story although I would have personaly prefered if akane's condition had been modelled after the Ku-jin of kindred of the east but then again no one has heard of that. Keep up the good work

Whoa! You kinda lost me on what was happening at the end there...But, I have to say its a great story so far! The grammar mistakes? I didn't even notice them. But if you do take RocsFlight's advice, I'd love to help.

When do you normaly update? Just so I will know and don't get ** off for nothing. ;D

I notice that you are from Spain. My guess is that English is a second language for you. This would explain a large number of the grammatical and word choice mistakes you have made. My suggestion would be to ask for more proof readers who have English as a first language.

Example:

Akane was near to die in China. What was its cost?

should be

Akane nearly died in China. What repercussions will there be?

or

Akane survived her near death experience in China, but at what cost?

Like it?I LOVE it.I never see Akane vamp fic before.And I hope you keep the good work up or else I kick ur ** *Grin*

ACK!