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Grasshopper
2007-04-19 . chapter 22
You wrote Jareth into a "Slayers" fic. Dude. You win at EVERYTHING.

Baby Lina! OMGissocute! Plus! The plushie! -:sparkles:- I couldn't stop laughing through and thought I would choke due to lack of oxygen before even finishing the first chapter! AND, OMG, THE -SONG-! Bwahahahaha~~! -:dies:-

Haha, poor Naga! And whee~ Filia! Xelloss is lucky she (generally) doesn't have Sylphiel's ability to catch him off guard! X3

"Because, Little Dragon, I've decided that you are to be the mother of my children."
...quite possibly, this is the best line in the entire fic. Srsly. (And, what the hey, Val -does- need a Daddy. ;) ENGAGEMENT! -:hearts:- You write the BEST Xelloss/Filia EVER!

Xelloss and Filia as Lina's "devil" and "angel" - Pure Genius! And Gourry, yelling at his subconscious mind! And Amelia! And Xelloss! (Really, they all know one another -far- too well...)

Lina the Lady! (Well, at least it's not Lina the Pink... ;)

The Lone Gunmen. asdlkf;alskdj'l OMG, you're so totally beyond awesome it's unreal! Squee~!

CLIFFHANGER~! GYARGH!

Um... If I keep this up, I'll never stop fangirling over this fic. But, yes, both it and you are totally made of awesome.
Lisa
2004-11-10 . chapter 12
The best slayers fic ever. Truly captures the spirit of the series.
Shozo Irie
2003-01-12 . chapter 22
This is fantastic. I can't wait to read Faces: Finale.
Do you know that you're the greatest writer of Slayers Fanfics in the Universe?

Way to go

2002-10-18 . chapter 2
I've just finished reading Faces and then found out about the sequel. I'm reviewing at this particular point because the Denise O'Leary quote in this chapter had me laughing so hard I fell out of my chair and gave myself a concusion after having my head banged against the tile floor. And I'm not just saying that either, I just got back from the emergency room. Not many writers can inspire this type of a reaction with me. I commend you for your quick and witty use of comedy throughout the Faces fics. Bravissimo! Oh, and by the way, I think that it is indredable brave of you to pair Zel and Sylph. I enjoy this couple as well, however, I realize the prejudices against it. You are totally spiffy. ^_^

~Sat-Isis/Suten Net
Banx
2002-06-01 . chapter 1
OMG!!!! BEST FANFIC EVER!!!!!! I LOVE THOSE LITTLE CHIBIS!!!!!!!!!!
Tamerine
2002-03-13 . chapter 1
I already wrote all the reasons I like both these stories in my 'Slayers-Faces' review, so let me just expand a bit for this one...

If nothing else, this story is even better than 'Faces'. I can't count all the hilarious, memorable moments in it that had me laughing outloud. I think one of my fave parts was Gourry chased by all his pesky subconscious chibis. Naga was as hilarious as ever.

Once again, there is a recurrence of what I assume are elements of the Slayers movies, which I don't like (i.e. Jeffrey and Shadow Lina), but again they're not too intrusive, and provide a lot of comedy.

I am no fan of Xelloss+Filia, but you handled the plot development of their relationship well-- it was refreshing to see Filia growing emotionally instead of directly falling into Xelloss's arms as she does in so many other stories, which is completely contrary to her characterization... The whole Peak element of it was a bit of a plot machination, perhaps, but the relationship was a whole provided so much comedy that I didn't mind it- and it did not violate either character's personality, which was good. The addition of Amara was another rather artificial plot machination, but once again the comedy more than made up for it, and she's a convincing enough character.

Zel+Sylphiel is, once again, VERY well handled, and some of the plot twists involving them, especially towards the end, were really great.

All in all-- once again, great story. I can't wait to read the third installment.
Jul-chan
2002-01-03 . chapter 1
Again, a compliment on the second part of the fic everyone was talking about which is also good.. like before... Keep it up. ^_^
DarthBirdie
2002-01-02 . chapter 22
How to laugh evilly for this master work. Should it be 'MWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA'? No, I think it should be 'OH HOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO'. Rock on, Naga, rock on. It's a good one, Dav. Now you just need a wee bit more solid ending.
Lateralus1
2001-12-15 . chapter 22
This is, when all is said and done... the epitome of what a fan fic should be. Action, adventure, drama, humor, and some kick ** angst. God, gotta love that angst. Great job. This is without question my favorite fan fic of all time. Take a bow. And when your done... write the rest!!! ^_^
Imoen
2001-11-12 . chapter 22
NO! Must have more! I NEED to know what'll happen! *cries and whines* Poor Sylphiel and Zelgadis! This is SO SAD!!!!!! *sniff* Oh well, I guess I can wait...patience is a virtue remember? ^o~ Loved it just as much as the first one!
Skyrocket
2001-10-04 . chapter 22
Good as always, Dav.
Rurouni Ken-ouki
2001-09-27 . chapter 22
Great work, Davner. I especially like the chibi-intervention. Can't wait to see more.
Mynuet
2001-09-24 . chapter 22
AUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGH! I _need_ the end of this story! Please? Pretty please?
Sethra Lavode
2001-08-27 . chapter 22
Heartbreaking, and welldone.... damn you Davner-chan for hurting Zel and Syl-chan this way.... ;_; If you don't give them marital bliss for at least a few years after this is resolved, I will break in Mace-chan on your head when you come back. ::hugs:: Come back to us from Basic Training safe, sound, and relatively sane. ^_^
Chibi Washuu
2001-08-24 . chapter 22
What??? You're leaving us??? NO!!!! You CAN'T!!!! *cry* I'll miss the antics of Xellos and Filia!!!!!! *sob* Oh, well... if I must survive, I will. *sniff* PLEASE update ASAP! I love this story!!! ^_^
~Washuu-san
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