its over? *CRIES*

fluffy but not to fluffy! You're lucky bcuz i'm a girl and i might be a lil biased bcuz girls are addicted to fluff! Anyway, good story! :)

haha... i like it... truly "short 'n sweet". that's the good stuff...

btw... ch3 is up for me... i know you wanted to read it...

That was so cute...the end line was the cutest...very fluffy too! Good job!

That was a lovely and cute story.

You're description fits exactly, "shot n' sweet" Incredibly cute!

PERFECT. Fluffdoves, Luna, Neville. Perfect.

You are so great! *hugs* You are so great at keeping Luna in character, and making Neville so wonderful! I have no words to describe how much I loved that except for the following: favorited again and again!

You rock so much!

*squeaks* How cute! Fluffdoves!! E! ;-) It's Laura, by the way, and I couldn't resist this fluffy fic you told me and Holly about. Ah, tis time for the departure to the band concert in my deliciously wrinkled shirt. :-D

Anywho, cute fic and I definitely think you should expand this idea into a longer fic--maybe with a possible future for after book six? :-D

Aww! That was so cute! I think I shall pat you on the back...a million times!

I was wondering if you'd allow me to put this story up on my n/l site, freewebs(dot)com / luna_neville/
I'm a very big neville/luna shipper and I'm always looking around for good authors.

Wonderfully touching story. Too bad JKR says that the Neville/Luna pairing won't happen romatically. Guess that is why we have fan fictions.

So cute! I wish more people wrote Luna/Neville fics

Aww. That was sweet.

Not bad ... wasn't that good but it was pretty good for a one-shot.