Wow. That was really...wow. Make sure that you watch your spelling, use of correct words, and CAPITALIZATION! Other than that a good story. The ending was kind of corny. Try not to use such of a...what is exprssion...cliche.

Aw! I love it!

absolutely wonderful

Man that was fast, but great all the same! I love how you kept Snape the bitter man he always was and will be. Yes, he softened up a bit, but he didn't turn into this Mary Sue character. Good job. I enjoyed reading it.

Whoa. That was quick. So..after Snape spilled his darkest secrets to Hermione they became best friends forever more?!?! It was a great chapter, as always, but a bit fast. Or did a skip a chapter by accident?

That was so sweet! It's amazing how close you came to the real story when you had written this only after HBP? Amazing.

Wow. You portrayed how Snape's life crumbled very well..and a very dark story this is. I love how everyone seems changed by the war...brilliant.

Whoa. Snape's a nasty piece of work here. I mean, I know JKR made him nasty..but your Snape is...a demon from hell, if you'll pardon the cliched bit. But very interesting. You have a way with writing Snape very well. Good job.

Very powerful beginning and ending of the first chapter. I was a bit surprised at Hermione's OOC ness but I guess the war changes all. Poor Harry...well, great start!

Nice story, but I have to say the ending did seem a bit rushed and the rest of the story rather forced. I'm not sure I like how Hermione is characterized as being so cowardly in telling Ron she doesn't want to be with him, but as JKR pretty much changed her to be like that in HBP, I can't really criticize you for that.

Interesting twist on the "Harry dies in the final battle" scenario. All in all, I enjoyed it and look forward to reading other stuff.

That was awesome! It was funny, witty, AND completely original! Or, if you want a different word, FANTASTIC! lol, I liked the ending how she just ran in there and hugged him, kissed him and said happy birthday, that was classic! I wish you would've continued...Oh well, great job! Bye-Bye Now! ^_^

Thats it? Hmm, its really good, but sevvie is way OOC in the two last chapters, and it ends so suddenly! I mean, what happens to them? to ron? Does he ever find true love? Do hermione and sev have kids? Besides that I liked it. Good job.

Mr snibbles

Very good story! I really enjoyed reading it. Hope to read more for you in the future. Celtic_witch

very good. well done. its finished. and i've reviewed. for the fear of being killed in the night if i didn't. i like it. tho the other characters clearly don't match up to the wonderful me...

haha, cute story :)