That ending was very adorable. I love how all your stories seem so original! It's pretty refreshing. I think JN fanfictions are the only ones I read.
Before I forget! Libby's name. You get it wrong every single time. I'm not sure why you think her full name is Elizabeth, but it's actually Liberty. Make a little more sense? Look it up if you don't believe me.

This was really, really cute. :3

I loved your writing style, and there were some golden moments in here. I loved the part where Jimmy told Betty that he'd be in a coma the day of the dance. I also loved the part where Jimmy yelled because Willoughby interrupted him, and then he said he stubbed his toe. XD Lol. That made me laugh pretty good. XD

Overall, this was a great fic to read. I enjoyed it quite a bit! :)

Aw... that was so cute :) Write on! (Sorry about the pun!)

Aww... Cute!

your story is per-fect-o! please make a sequel! please please please please!

Excellent!, one of the best ones that I have read!.And so funny I LOVE comedy!.

Brilliant!

Great story i never thought hey were going to get together! Good job

so many good parts in this chap! Loved Carl's intuitiveness- beutiful! And the hunk muffin part, of course!

Thanks!

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aw...this is SOO cute!

aw! great ending to he story, this is the end, right? Anyway, great chapter, and keep up the good work

That was one of the cutest stories I've evere read. It was very funny everytime Jimmy tried to ask Cindy to the dance. Awesome job!

THAT was a good chapter man. Update again asap.

Hello. Great few more chapters again. Poor Jimmy, keeps getting interupted. Well great job! hope the next chapys up soon. :)

that was a really good story. Could you please update again asap? Email me if you have writers block or something.