updates plox?

Very well-written, and a unique premise. Please don't leave it abandoned.

What an odd premise. I was getting into the story too! I'm sorry to see it peter out like this. I have a hope of eventually seeing more. I'm so curious about how Nabiki will "raise" Ranma.

Interesting and unique story so far. Please update soon!

Wow, this story is great. I NEED to read more. Update, please.

UPDATE!!

so ranma was married BEFORE he met the amazons? then what about herb, and saffron, and all that?

Ok, well Ranma's chapter 1 characterisation is explained. Someone else mentioned you might be better combining chapters, and I'd agree that 1and 2 should probably be one chapter..

Ok, It didn't make sense the first time I read it, but I noticed that Ranma was older when I went back to read more carefully.

There is not enough to comment on yet, other than it being very odd and well clearly out of Ranma's normal character.. Hmm..

Interesting so far, looking forward to the update.

Not a bad story can't wait for the next chapter

Calamite

Not terrible, but I don't like when people remove Ranma so completely from the equation. Sometimes it works, when you center around a different character. But the Ranma you introduced was appealing, and the main character for a while... getting rid of him at one stroke isn't very good.

Interesting story. Assuming everthing not directly involving the Amazons happened as it did in the Canon if the Amazons keep going after Ranko Genma could call in one of Ranma's markers - the promise of Herb, ruler of the Musk.

On a side note the police *would* understand it as such honor killings are part of Japanese history and not in the dim past either. Perhaps enough to help cover it up.

A very nice twist, making Nabiki hate Ranma for abandoning her sister when she died and then have her be the girls new ward. I would have liked to see the moment when Ranma would have walked into the Room when she heard the raised voices. Also, while the plot elements in this chapter are good, a writer with your talents could have done better with the execution. I think this chapter needs a bit of polishing. Anyway, this is curently one of my favorite reads, so :) keep writing.

I really love this chapter. This fic is shaping up into a very good story. I look forward to the next chapter.