|Reviews for House of Drawn Shades|
| Alice 5/4/13 . chapter 7
I am anxious to read the rest of this story; I have read and liked TOH but I really want to find out how the story ends! I really love how.. depraved? the lot of the Malfoys are. It annoys me to no end when I commit to a story, but find out that the author has Draco turn to the light far too soon/easily; or when they make Lucius a closet sap.. but i suppose that is what fanfiction is for.. anyway, I love your writing/characterizing. and I hope you come back to this and finish your story!
| psychotic me 9/24/06 . chapter 7
I love it! i almost never like angst and abuse fics, but i love this one!
| HeraBates 9/6/06 . chapter 7
After reading the authors notes I went back and went clue hunting as pathetic as that sounds, lol.
I loved Lucius this chapter. That might make me sound strange but I prefer him to be a bastard. The letter and the bit about "Granger" had me on the edge of my seat. I had to keep myself from yelling at Cassidy so that she didn't read the letter. I could tell something terrible was going to happen and I think that she knew as well.
I'm curious about why you're redoing TOH. Are you just editing grammar or changing the basics to the fic? I didn't think it needed much work but I can understand not being completely satisfied with something if that's why you're fixing it up.
| HeraBates 9/6/06 . chapter 6
Hm... Draco's behaviour has me thinking, and I am scaring myself with how I am continually attempting to figure out what on earth is going on more than 10 minutes after finishing a chapter.
I must say that the way that you have written these characters is incredible. They seem to jump off of the screen (and they would jump off the page if you ever published anything that was even half as good as these fics have been).
| Ailla 8/3/06 . chapter 7
Thanks for updating! Well, now I know that Cassidy is not Hermione. She is too slow...Haha..Talking back to Lucius while being chained up in HIS dungeon is not too bright. hehe Hermione must be alive and I bet she's in that tower.
| autumnspices 7/27/06 . chapter 7
"And thus started her personal mystery of figuring out her memory and scanning every bit of it for Draco Malfoy." Hmm...interesting. Yes, I did wonder if she'd have seen him before, from what *cough* I know from the old version of TOH...(haha initials...)
"But then what? The question echoed the cavern of her mind. What could Lucius be educating her about? Something for the future? More about the Malfoys, so she wouldn’t be so clumsy, such a screw-up?" SKETCHY...hahahahaha jk
"Every one of them will be difficult to remember, but with the circumstances you will be under, you will remember them." You've got Narcissa's character down perfectly, you do realize that? It's amazing...:)
Personal pet peeve: you always refer to people as "the Malfoy", which confuses me because we call Draco "Malfoy" in the books and I automatically assume it's Draco even when I *know* it's not.
"twist more fire into her bones." ergh...*shivers* you have some amazing descriptions. Every time I think you spend too much time describing the pain, I end up not caring.
Ahh...and the bit about her figuring out that Lucius had a part in the Death (as you phrased it). Nicely done, subtle...:)
Ah-hah...I see something interesting...I'm asking on AIM :)
"Pain that was worse than anything she ever could've imagined." I don't know, my dear...that initial waking-up pain was pretty damn bad...and "edges sinking into her, striking her face and body so quickly that she had no time to scream out." Again with the great, great description.
"The little wench was going down." No offense...not in character, even if it's a narrative bit, because it's talking from Lucius's POV.
AGH! The ending! Yes, you do enjoy writing physical pain...I enjoy writing emotional pain...we could take over the emo world! lmao!
So yeah...great stuff...and all that :) long enough? heehee
Keep it up!
| autumnspices 7/27/06 . chapter 6
GAH I didn't review? I cannot believe this! oh well...anyway...the most powerful scene here is that wonderful bit where she screams at Draco, and I love the flashbacks about Hermione...idk if it's possible for Draco to love, but...well, I sense feelings between him and hermione (have sensed for a long, long time with The October Hollow)...hmm. muhahahaha. but you're not going to tell, are you?
Your descriptions are excellent. There are a couple of tiny errors but nothing major. Nice job!
I love this story. It's excellent.
"Ivy" heehee (that's what we'll call me...) :D
| blowthineenemiestotinybits 7/26/06 . chapter 1
OMG!1! this is like the aweomest story i've ever read you have to continue it pls except of course casidey wouldn't be as popular at hogwarts as my character, my oc autumn who you should read about becasue she's freaking awesome and anyway this is good, good job. your grammar is pretty good, idk i've seen better. like read mine NOW.
k cool update soon
| Lily's Lil Sis 7/25/06 . chapter 7
I simply cannot fathom how you are such an amzing writter. I can't even dream of being a writter like you. You truly are amazing! And I really mean it! Siriusly! LOL!
I LOVe this chapter, incredible!
Please update as soon as possible!
Lots of love comin' your way,
| Lily's Lil Sis 5/17/06 . chapter 6
OMG! Can you say cliffhanger?
I'm sorry I haven't talked in a while, I've been so busy.
Well, before I say anything else, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! 15! That's so amazing!
I'll send you a proper e-mail wishing you the best in a moment, but I was here, so, what the hell!
I really need to update my stories as well, so don't feel too bad! I'll send them over to you as soon as I write some more!
Oh, I miss you soo much, you simply have to come to high school next year. I know everyone else misses you almost as much as I you.
Well, I don't want to make this extremly long, so I'll let you get back to typing your little fingers off.
Lily's Lil Sis
P.S. Amazing, amazing work on your story. I still can't figure you out yet. LOL!
| curlyqntx 5/11/06 . chapter 6
Hey girly! Sorry I didn't send this back betaed. I have been SO busy with AP exams, and school work and work in general. It's hard being a senior. BUt tottaly worth it! LOL! I hope you post more soon. Huggles!
| OoGabyoO 5/11/06 . chapter 6
as well written as always! i was literally sitting on the edge of my seat, scrolling through this story like there was no tomorrow! if i were cassidy...i would've jumped draco from the start...why wait for him to make the first move? i mean...it's not like she has anything better to do anyway! but i guess a girl has to have some dignity...poo! alrighty...i can't wait for you to update...i just bought a nice little flame thrower...there will be some fiery repercussions if you don't update soon! hahaa...
| Miranda Took 5/11/06 . chapter 6
Great job, you know how to work at suspense.
| Ailla 5/10/06 . chapter 6
Of course when ever Draco comes the story gets more interesting. ;)10 Chapters of violence and no ANSWERS. Well, you are going to have to work much faster or else I will have to drive you up a wall, nagging. :P
| OoGabyoO 3/23/06 . chapter 5
MY GOODNESS...THIS IS GETTING VERY EXCITING! I'M ANXIOUS TO SEE...ERR...READ ABOUT DRACO! AS ALWAYS...YOU'RE A WONDERFUL STORYTELLER AND I HOPE TO READ THE NEW CHAPTER SOON!