The story itself is good and reads well, but could you please do something to seperate the scenes? It gets a bit confusing when I'm just reading along and suddenly I'm in a different place with different characters. A couple asterisks or something as a divider would make it much easier...

Hello, It's "Zavval" again. It's been awhile. If I had known you had responded to my "review" I would've written back then. But, I digress. I would first like to say that I enjoy your story. Especially the *ahem* baby scene in this chapter. (I don't wish to give anything more away to those who have not yet read it.) I am always a fan of fanfiction which re-writes history, so to speak. How I wish what you write was official. :)

Second, I would like to clear something up. I do not mind R.A. Salvatore. I do not like the events that occured within the novel he penned. This is very much like how I do not mind Troy Denning. I *hate* the events that occured withing the novel *he* penned. As it is, I no longer read the NJO because I disagree very strongly with the events within Star By Star, the way the series is being handled, and the fact that many characters seem to not be in their right minds. But I do not hate the author because of it. What they did, yes, them, no.

Besides, you can't judge an entire person on

*one* thing they have ever done (or in this case, written). Does the fact that Salvatore killed Chewie in Vector Prime mean that he is the kind of person who kicks puppies and steals candy from children? No. Which is why I found your comment regarding him being "Sithspawn" offensive. It seemed very judgemental to me.

Now, I'm fairly certain my email is displayed in my bio page, but in case it is not, please feel free to send me a personal response via . I await your rebuttal. :)

*claps*

*bows*

*starts worshipping author*

that is absolutly postively seriously the best star wars story i've ever read. and it's not even a fett romance! Oh gee golly gosh you have to write more soon! the FFnet systems are all back online so you have no excuses now! so. Back to work! .

I ddin't know what to think comming into this fic but After reading threw the chapters I throughly enjoyed it very much and can't wait till the next update

keep writing

interesting, and scary, keep writing.

Zavval,

So? It's called saying "no" What would you have done? I, personally, would have called up Lucas on the phone and asked him if he knew about this, and what he thought about it. Salvator, to my mind, is WORSE than Sithspawn, but I didn't want to loose a rating over HIM. You like him, that's your problem, not mine. And if you're goign to talk to me about HIM, at least include your e-mail so that I can respond personally. As far as I know, Lucas had no clue that they were gonna kill the Wook, and didn't much like it when he found out. Besides, at the least, HE should have written a "way out" so that Chewie could turn up later. It's easy, believe me. In fact, you can even arrange one with the way he "wrote" it-it may be weak but it's better than killing Chewie that way. If anybody else out there likes Salvator, I am SO sorry for them. They need to find a new life. Need help? I'll give you a starting hint: pick your literature better. ...Uh...sorry. My mouth-or in this case, my fingers-has a tendency to run off, especially on this topic. I didn't mean to offend anybody out there. I more than welcome flames, as long as you can stand a reply to them. :) If you want to, (and if you think you should, please do, seriously, I respect that urge) just please put in your e-mail so that I can send a personal response, not an open-air one that might offend somebody who DIDN'T "flame" but happens to agree-and if you do, for Sith's sake, flame me. :) Hope everybody out there likes it so far! Sorry, I've been away, only just got back from Europe, so there hasn't been anything new for a bit. I'll get to work on that right away, I promise :) -Kitty

Even though I don't agree with Lucasfilm killing off Chewie I would just like to tell you that R.A. Salvatore is an excellent author and that he didn't have a choice in whether or not to kill off Chewie. After he was signed on to write for the New Jedi Order series he was told to kill off a major character and that character was Chewie. I'm sorry to flame but you really offended me with that Sithspawn comment.

Wow...love the way you brought back Chewie. I guess you don't really like R.A. Salvator, but with that book, i can't blame you. He kills Chewie and gives Mara a fatal disease in one book! Anyway, great job!

YAY! You finally got it up! I love it! It rocks dude! But, I'm the first one to review it! Neener neener neener!