This is really cute. :) I love it. I find it hard to write in soubi's perspective, Dunno why. xD;

Adorable and very well written! :)

Really nice insight into Soubi's point of view. Alot of people are unable to capture that.
Nice fic!

kawaii kawaii KAWAII ! lovres it, do you KNOW how FRICKIN ADORABLE it was !!??

well it was. awesome.

Aw. so bittersweet! Ah great job!
Cheers
Crmy

i really enjoy this story it has a warmness to it that is very satisfing to a reader plz to continue some more i look forward to reading them.

AWW! KAWAI!

I think you got Soubi's point of view pretty well ^_^ Great job on this one. It's really sweet!

Gorgeous!! Brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful writing, truly. Please give me more!

Aw, that's really cute.^^

Love this fic! Wow can't wait to read more thanks for posting here at ffnet!

Wow, awesome. This is so far the best Loveless fic I have read. Thank you for letting Soubi cuddle Ritsuka, we didn't nearly have enough of that in the show. And thumbs up for the kiss. Gosh, can't say how much I love those two.

ah, man... just lovely. Pure and sweet, and so very telling of the nature of their relationship. You've captured Soubi beautifully, and Ritsuki with his innocence and blustering independence.

Thank you for writing such a sweet fic.

Aw... that was really, really cute. ^^ This is going straight to my favorites.

~*~Ammy

I didn't know there were loveless fanfictions now ^-^
This was very calm and sweet, you made thier connection so clear.
It was great to read this because even though you said it's hard to see through Soubi's point of view, I think you captured them both really well ^-^
Bye-cha!