Nice ending.I cant wait to continue reading the FFIX one.

The only part I didnt get was, when did Baldok threaten his wife and child?Was it just in general of him attacking people or did he actually threaten them in the story?

Hey, I just realized something.Wasnt Genkai killed in the Dark Tournament?I thought Toguro killed her after Yusuke had that big training thing.Anyway, good story so far.

This is a cool story and my friends is gonna red it too as soon as I tell her the title!

hey dude remember me? well in case not i was the guy that used to ask when the next story was coming out. so to keep up with old times ill do the same. Ithink u should write another story like the rest but with an unexpected twist like when togoro came back.if you diside to write another one please tell me the name and when its coming out. well thats only if your writing a new one.
ps. great talking to you again
Yusuke995.

Hmm. Yeah, I guess stopping his ability to breethe would kill him...

Ah, a sweet, satisfying end. I feel all fuzzy inside!

Wow sure add a sequel soon as possible add more now now thanks jessica

Wow Yusuke and the others defeated the elder Toguro hopefully he won't be back add the epiloge now now and hurry thanks Jessica

awesome chapter1!!
I really loved it :D
I can't wait to see whats going to happen in the next chapter ^__^

0.0 Oro... that's creepy...

*Wince* Ouch. Big-time insult there. But still great! ^_^

Wow didn't see that coming ad more now now thanks Jessica

Similar ending to the chapter. It's a lot like last chapter.

Strange that he'd brutally kill him like that. It just seems out of character.