Well this might of not been my favorite Ranma/pokemon cross over ever, I think that will always belong to Fist of the Picachu. Still this wasn't to bad, the Evee route was pretty unusual. Ranma's pokemon personalty was rather nice as well. At times the fic seems to lack detail, falling into the 'fast forward' pace a little to much. But over all I liked this fic, and where it was going. I am sad that it was discontinued like so many other Ranma/Pokemon fics. In fact I can hardly think of any completed ones..

likes the crossover of these universes, hopes to see another, byes

The main killer of my fictions is that as well. But digressing isn't something that I should type.

The real reason behind this review is to ask you to repost your orginal work so that people can see where you were heading (in their opinions) and so that they can enjoy what you had written (but thought insufficent, just my guess on why the rewrite).

You never know, someone might want to pick this fiction up and work on it.

I your new story don't go stait for power. What, in my oppinion, makes ranma so strong is his skill and adaptablility not his total power. If you want just powerhouses use ryoga, herb, lime, taro, or even akane. I always look forward to reading another good fic

I will miss this story. Both it and the original are good. Good luck on future projects.

Sorry to hear that.

I look forward to seeing if you can pull it together better. I look forward to your return.

Innortal

There's another story - Unnamed Master by Sierra-Falls that is a Ranma/ Pokemon x-over... maybe you can combine efforts with this author?

excellent work

Great job very well written. Until next time keep up the good work.

There is one sentance in this paragraph doesn't make sense:

Near to their settling site, Ranma knew of a set of bushes and trees that held abundant fruit. He’d been to almost every one of the bushes, and today was going for the last one. Searching near the bottom, where he knew the largest berries were, Ranma was surprised to come across a pair of dark glasses. Unknown to him, it was actually a pokemon item, but decided anyway that Eevee would like it; perhaps it would help him find a name for his friend? Of course, Ranma wondered, who’d be stupid enough to leave around something like this?

Didn't he already name him Shroud?

Since the story seems to be getting a dearth of reviews, I'll make one. I tend to prefer stories where Ranma's curse is a factor, but I will read this one as long as you're writing. Grammar and spelling are good and knowledge of the series involved seem okay.
Ciao

Excellent chapter, keep it up.

This is a delightful fan fiction. I will be waiting for the next chapters on this story and job!

Nicely done.

Innortal

Awe poor Ranma oh well. Great chapter I hope to see more soon. Until nest time keep up the good work.