 Rizu14 2009-09-25 . chapter 1Aww so cute! That sounds like me before my first roller coaster. i thought it's just a ride no reason to be scared right? Wronge! Thankfully my best friend offered his hand for support. Now I really enjoy roller coasters, the house of terror or what ever it is a different story.
Any way great story love it! Hope to read more of your IchiXRuki things XD 10/10 |
 MoonLightCrow 2009-08-25 . chapter 1Well, you do realize that you've got to make a sequel of this one with these two trying the other rides, right?
*rolls eyes* Tchk, great! That must've sounded so darned demanding...
Uhm... guess I discovered this ficlet a little bit late... about four years... nice delay on my side...
Pff, I'm rambling, actually I just wanted to say I loved it!
*faves* |
 Finale Kamui 2008-08-01 . chapter 1okay i know this was written in 2005, so most likely you won't read this but i'll review it anyway
you need another chapter, you cut it off way to short that the end, almost as though making us expect something and not showing us, unless you wrote a sequel which i will check later
pretty good with the characters and their short develpment, and well with their feelings, in all, i'd have to say a pretty good attempt, could have expanded on their moments, but other then that, very good attempt
Kamui |
 JainaZekk621 2008-06-18 . chapter 1lol this is great! I remember when I got scared of my first time riding a rollercoaster! Then after that I'm not scared. =]
Awesome story! =D |
 Nightsmoke 2008-04-06 . chapter 1Cute, cute. Keep up the good writing =] |
 Sierra77 2007-09-01 . chapter 1wow that was really great, you should make a next one with her and ichigo on a roller coaster! |
 Anthony1989 2007-06-02 . chapter 1Now that was funny. I could easily picture Rukia's ignorance and then instant fear. Good job. |
 KittiKat626 2006-10-08 . chapter 1Oh, wow! I love this! *Faves*
~KittiKat |
 MultipleCyrosis 2006-04-05 . chapter 1hehehehe this is sweet... and a great idea to, I might add...
keep up the good work...
-evil grin- this could have possiblities XD |
 Frou Frou 2006-03-20 . chapter 1 Very sweet =) |
 gossa 2006-03-01 . chapter 1nice oneshot,i have liked it ^^ |
 L.uca Kerberos 2006-02-21 . chapter 1Aw, that was really cute. Though I do hate that ride. I've seen my friends ride it, and even that freaks me out.XD |
 Kimiko [AKA anime obsesser] 2006-01-27 . chapter 1 luv it!
so cute! |
 Demo-nisshu jinketsu Duke 2005-09-09 . chapter 1Good Very good...You do realize now that you must continue this story |
 Kuro- Ippikiookami21 2005-08-09 . chapter 1ahh so cute. MWAHAHA
Ichigo is so evil... ^^
I like how you made Ichigo so..nice, but he doesn't sound Japanese. He sounds American.
Nonetheless, this story was rather quite enjoyable.
Short and Sweet, just like the two of them.
Cheers! :D |