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Rizu14
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
Aww so cute! That sounds like me before my first roller coaster. i thought it's just a ride no reason to be scared right? Wronge! Thankfully my best friend offered his hand for support. Now I really enjoy roller coasters, the house of terror or what ever it is a different story.
Any way great story love it! Hope to read more of your IchiXRuki things XD 10/10
MoonLightCrow
2009-08-25 . chapter 1
Well, you do realize that you've got to make a sequel of this one with these two trying the other rides, right?

*rolls eyes* Tchk, great! That must've sounded so darned demanding...

Uhm... guess I discovered this ficlet a little bit late... about four years... nice delay on my side...

Pff, I'm rambling, actually I just wanted to say I loved it!

*faves*
Finale Kamui
2008-08-01 . chapter 1
okay i know this was written in 2005, so most likely you won't read this but i'll review it anyway

you need another chapter, you cut it off way to short that the end, almost as though making us expect something and not showing us, unless you wrote a sequel which i will check later

pretty good with the characters and their short develpment, and well with their feelings, in all, i'd have to say a pretty good attempt, could have expanded on their moments, but other then that, very good attempt

Kamui
JainaZekk621
2008-06-18 . chapter 1
lol this is great! I remember when I got scared of my first time riding a rollercoaster! Then after that I'm not scared. =]

Awesome story! =D
Nightsmoke
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
Cute, cute. Keep up the good writing =]
Sierra77
2007-09-01 . chapter 1
wow that was really great, you should make a next one with her and ichigo on a roller coaster!
Anthony1989
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
Now that was funny. I could easily picture Rukia's ignorance and then instant fear. Good job.
KittiKat626
2006-10-08 . chapter 1
Oh, wow! I love this! *Faves*

~KittiKat
MultipleCyrosis
2006-04-05 . chapter 1
hehehehe this is sweet... and a great idea to, I might add...

keep up the good work...

-evil grin- this could have possiblities XD
Frou Frou
2006-03-20 . chapter 1
Very sweet =)
gossa
2006-03-01 . chapter 1
nice oneshot,i have liked it ^^
L.uca Kerberos
2006-02-21 . chapter 1
Aw, that was really cute. Though I do hate that ride. I've seen my friends ride it, and even that freaks me out.XD
Kimiko [AKA anime obsesser]
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
luv it!
so cute!
Demo-nisshu jinketsu Duke
2005-09-09 . chapter 1
Good Very good...You do realize now that you must continue this story
Kuro- Ippikiookami21
2005-08-09 . chapter 1
ahh so cute. MWAHAHA
Ichigo is so evil... ^^
I like how you made Ichigo so..nice, but he doesn't sound Japanese. He sounds American.
Nonetheless, this story was rather quite enjoyable.
Short and Sweet, just like the two of them.
Cheers! :D
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