Alana: aw *giggles* so cute and funny, your avery good writer

Evo: wonder why she doesn't write story with her ouw made up characters.

Page: writing could just her hobby?

I thinhk, that for writing it at such a late hour at night, that this turned out pretty well! But I think Wonka would have talked through a megaphone or something.

Anyway, nice little fic!

Yes, people are actually reading what you write. If I count as a person, that is. I found your story from an author of one of my favorites to her favorites to her favorites to her favorites to you.

And I enjoyed it very much.

(Note: loose should be lose)

It was . . . fun. Mr. Wonka seems much more observant of Charlie than I would have guessed, but that's not necessarily a *bad* thing. Just interesting.

Very good start...not good in writing reviews...hope you may continue ill check out your other works if not. =) tell ya a secret...i wish someone would kinda rewrite the movie but all in wonka point of view...hehe

update son! id like to hear his thoughts in the movie!

Hi! Yup, me again. I finally got around to reading your oneshot, and I like it. I do think you should rewrite it though. Anyhow, good job, and update Being A Big Brother soon, or I'll send Violet and Veruca after you! ;) LOL.

yay yay! i love johnny depp, jack sparrow and WW...i wish they were the same person...
candycreamvixon:...they are you dork.
me:they are! wow that's...HEY!

AH! That's great! ^^

I do like your Wonka's feelings, I really do. This is a great 'prequel' of sorts for the movie.

You really should write more. I know you've already go that 'Being a Big Brother' fic out. But...*big eyes* please? Hehehe.

Great story!

It's very cute. ^__^

Better than most fictions. -sighs- Theres so many Mary-Sue with Wonka stories I cant seem to find ones that DONT have a made up character.

one things for sure, I like this story! Great grammar, follows the story line, doesnt break the rules (Like, more than 1 person going with one of the FIVE lucky golden ticket winners) etc etc.

^_^ BYE! I LUV Y OU!

It wasn't horrible! It was awesome! Loved it! Can't wait for more!

I enjoyed this a lot! I think you've got Wonka's kooky voice down pat, and that's hard to do. I love the part where he worries about losing the factory and having to live in that shack--and what a great touch, to have it be the Buckets' shack.

One thing: it's spelled "lose," not "loose." "Loose" is a different word entirely. *g*

"Good Morning, Starshine! The earth says Hello!" is one of my favorite lines from the movie. Nice ficlet. It made me smile.

oh no. its not horrible. its great! i loved it!