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Cyde
2008-06-30
ch 7,
abuseAgain, why aren't you updating THIS story?
CRose
2008-05-15
ch 7,
abuseTwo years since the last update? Damn that sucks, I wanted to see what Ranma would do to the girls while he was sleeping. Great story!
moritynz
2008-04-06
ch 7,
abuseWicked story so far, please update
MDR
2008-03-10
ch 7, anon.
abuseYou know, this would be even more amusing if you went the other way with Nabiki and Ranma's reactions to the senshi's interest. Have Ranma and Nabiki flirt with the senshi, obviously and openly. Innuendos, massages, teasing. Let the girls know that they are welcome to join in the bedroom fun. How would the girls react? How would they react as they, one by one, began taking Nabiki and Ranma up on their offers? I'm not talking about a harem fic, more along the lines of friends with benefits (except for Ranma and Nabiki themselves, as they would be in love).

You could start out with the last chapter. Have Nabiki come in, find Minako, Makoto, and Ranma in bed, and realize that it didn't make her jealous as she thought. Instead she sees the opportunity for fun. And what starts out as Minako and Makoto playing a joke turns into what they came there for in the first place. the way those two would react when they next see their friends would be very funny, and how they react to each other.
Rabid Squirrel
2007-12-08
ch 7, anon.
abuseWill this ever be updated? :(
Lesychan
2007-10-09
ch 7,
abuseNice Fic...but why wont the other Senshi train on Pluto & Co...i mean at least Outers should have enough exp to do that...
Asgeras
2007-08-07
ch 7,
abuseBwa ha ha. Great fic. ^^ I certainly enjoy some of your stories, this one being no exception to the rule.

I hope that you end up continuing this fic. I don't see it on the dead fic list, so I still have hope.

One thing that I hope happens fairly soon is the revelation that Ranma and Nabiki are Sailor Sol/Solaris Knight and Sailor Nemesis. I'm pretty sure that Michiru and Ami would end up figuring it out after the inevitable revelation that Ranma has a Jusenkyo curse. They're smart enough to put 2 and 2 together, and Usagi also has an occasional blast of insight as well. It's always better to find out first hand.

Well, thanks for the fic. Ja ne.
DR4G0lV
2007-07-08
ch 7, anon.
abuseVEry very good. Please update soon!
ApocSM
2007-06-15
ch 7,
abuseWOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!
Drifter950
2007-05-02
ch 7,
abuseI really enjoyed "No Need for Destiny". Enough for me to check out your Profile and read a number of others that you have done. I also discovered that "Papa's Back", on my story alert list fore bout a year of so, was one of yours.

Makes putting you on my "Favorite Authors list" very easy!

I have found "The Reborn" fascinating! The beginning with Pluto's revelations, search and decisions set the story very well. The fixing the neko problem, the possible harem and the definite future family, was something of a given, but how you did it was always a surprise. Ranma's maturity and more intelligent adversaries is a definite improvement from the cannon anime. I enjoyed your , more of less, happy endings for NWC to.

One point in question. Have you changed the style of Ranma's art at all? Since he is still in the Ranma 1/2 universe, the use of the "Anything Goes" and the "Amazon" styles could be recognized, specially since active practitioners of those arts are very close. Even the canon has the Senshi battles showing up on tv.

Again, thank you for very good reads!


May the MUSE be with you!
....
2007-04-06
ch 7, anon.
abuseMore?
DR4G0lV
2007-03-18
ch 7, anon.
abuseI love the story, hope it continues.
Nysk
2007-03-02
ch 5,
abuseExcellent story. As is most of this authors works! I look forwaard to more!
Taeniaea
2007-01-12
ch 7,
abuseI Love The Chapter:7 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
deathrunner
2007-01-02
ch 1,
abuseA very interesting story look foward to more.
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