I think that maybe what Andromeda feels towards Nacrissa in this situation isn't dissapointment I think she pities her, because she has what Andromeda does and she doesn't choose the right path in Andromeda's opinion, If they were booth my sisters I would eb more dissapointed in Bella still dissapointed with nacrissa but more pitiable...either way great idea I haven't read anything like it and the opinions you expressed were refreshing great job very creative
cheers
Lauren

really deep and original and the story is fabulous

I love reading about the Black sisters. You're a really good writer as well. It was great!

Maaybe because we grew up knowing Narcissa, but she means the most to me.

That was better than Bellatrix. All the insight I really got from Ch. 1 was that Bella was deranged and killed a toad.
This gives new information about Lucius and Narcissa's relationship. Good.

What I expected. Not particularly exciting, but not really bad.

i really like it! but toujours pur is french not latin.i should know i do both of those languages!

love it.

really good story! i like the idea, very original, its really cool. i quite enjoyed it. :D

Hey, I've always liked hearing about the Black sisters. But you don't hear much. This was really well written!
Well done, you should be really happy with it!

Awesome. I lurved your interpretation of Andromeda. Great story.
Keep writing!
~Deb-lil

Holy cow, you are a writing phenom. To ch. 3, shall I?
~Deb-lil

That literally sent shivers down my spine. It was exactly how I imagined that little creep would be as a child. You're a very good writer, and I liked how you slipped Doris Crockford in there.
Onward to Ch. 2.
~Deb-lil

Wow, you just keep the good stories coming, don't you?

That was good. You did capture Andromeda's esscence well. She knew she was a Black, but being a Black didn't define her. That was good. I liked how we saw 3 points of view in this story. We never see the points of views of these characters, and its a nice change to see the world through their eyed. Keep writing!