 Shion-san 2006-11-02 . chapter 17The image of Havoc pretending to take a ** in a bush just made me laugh so my cat looked at me because I had woken her from her nap. But I don't like her anyways. Moving on, this was just great, I love the interactions between Havoc and the dog, and then how everything gets referenced back to Fury. Definitely was fun to read. |
 Shion-san 2006-11-02 . chapter 15Poor Roy, rejected due to stubble and bad breath. This is an adorable morning story, and I've read a lot of like stories, but I can say this one made me smile quite a bit more than usual. I guess because of the thought of Roy being catlike. I love how "gerroff" is now a word used commonly and understood... but yes, this was quite wonderful. |
 Shion-san 2006-11-02 . chapter 14This was just cute, I like how you didn't ever say who the speaker was, because really, you didn't need to. But these magnetic poetry drabbles tend to be very cute. I like how you describe without really describing, that sounds weird, but it's true. Very well done! |
 Shion-san 2006-11-02 . chapter 13Now this was just sadly sweet, I guess the idea of black coffee with two sugars sort of made me think that's how the story was, black and sad with just a dash of sweet. I like where Roy taps his heart to imply Hughes' picture would be there, that's just... picturesque. |
 Shion-san 2006-11-02 . chapter 12I realize I haven't reviewed in, over a year, but I came across a bit of time recently while procrastinating on other things and decided to go through my bookmarks, and stumbled once again on this drabbles collection. So I return to reviewing. This story's cute, even if I disagree--Fury and Havoc are much better than second best! But the sentiment between them through the whole drabble was adorable, it was a fun and attractive read. |
 Duo 2006-02-16 . chapter 17 And that, Aaron, is why I will NEVER own another chawawa... ^_^ This is cute though. |
 Rei Asakura 2005-11-22 . chapter 16Why do you rock so much? THIS is real drabble- short, humourous, poignant, not trying to be deep by cutting length. Sugoi desu ne. |
 Reject From The Back Of The Bus 2005-11-21 . chapter 16Heh heh heh.
Even though it's not RoyEd, it's still cute.
And, lazy ** taht I am, have decided to quote from the last drabble:
"You're drivin' me **' bugnuts."
I love that!
Keep updating! |
 Rei Asakura 2005-11-20 . chapter 6Hey, these are awesome. Very well-paced and complete in and of themselves. Your characterizations are also rock-solid, which is something I sort of hit and miss at...you just rock, don't you. Shiteitta. (I knew it.) |
 Reject From The Back Of The Bus 2005-11-02 . chapter 14Lovely.
Are you going to continue this? |
 Duo 2005-10-07 . chapter 14 And once again, you're genius is showing.
I guess my writing will get better as I work at it, too. |
 Sulcal 2005-10-06 . chapter 4*waves* It's me, Duo. What can I say? You already know. I just had to leave the library and thought I'd drop a note and say... well... wonderful job, as I thought it would have been.
And this all inpired me to write a short drabble (which I got more words out of than I thought I would have).
Thanks, Aaron. |
 Neferet10210 2005-09-29 . chapter 14;_; The most recent drabbles have been sad.
Can't wait for more! |
 Shion-san 2005-08-08 . chapter 11First--ignore any horrible errors in this review, I put off reading and reviewing so long I just had to ASAP, which happened to be at four in the morning on a Monday. Anyways... you know, it's really hard to comment on this at all. HOW desperate do you have to be to start licking someone else's ashtray?! ... But now that I think about it, I would pick up, buy (no matter how much it cost) and read a book called "An Intimate Moment with an Ashtray", ESPECIALLY if it were by Riza Hawkeye. Now I have guilt, for I have been "ULTRA"-thanked and this review is probably not very good... well, I will say this was very, very amusing and it took me a few minutes to realize it wasn't a joke. I read the first line, then stopped, reread the first line, then stopped, again reread the first line, then read the second line and burst out laughing. By the way, good luck with your boyfriend hunt! |
 Neferet10210 2005-08-08 . chapter 11Oh my. Oh my. It's like... SUPA CRACK FICTION...
Or something. xD Oh geeze.
-Sigh- xDD Great work. |