I KNOW I KNOW... OHH I HOPE IM RIGHT.. I RUST YOU...YOUR A CLEVER WRITER

yay!

OMG< That was so f'ing hot, I need several hot showers.

this story threw me off balance a lot. i'm not sure if i liked it or not but it's definately origional. i don't think Grissom could ever be portrayed as violent, especially to Sara.

WOW!! Loved it so much. Couldn't walk away from it. Everything flowed so nicely that I never got lost even thou there was a lot going on. You are a very talented writer. Hope to see more stories like this.

Damn, did I respond to this before. If I did I hope I let you know how awesome it was. There were times in the show when I could have kicked Grissom's ** for his behavior, but in this story I wanted to kill him. It was very intense.
I hope you have another Grissom-Sara in the works.

I would love to say that this whole story was wonderful. I enjoyed reading it. I would also like to say that I absolutley loved the part when Gil was asking to propose to Sara.. and Sara was all like.. - Hi.. I am having a baby.. maybe you can ask me again later.. - That was awesome!

i have no idea how you managed to keep grissom in character even when he was all angry, that takes talent.

I guess dinner with Grissom is out then? LOL.

I'm thinking back to the first or second chapter when the woman that hosted their welcome to the neighborhood party put a bug in the telephone. May have something to do with why there hasn't been anymore murders.

And what's with the creepy old guy?

Well...let's hope that Grissom's anger doesn't get that out of control. Therapy is always an option (Grin.)

Who is this mystery guy? Is this Grissom's father?

I still don't know what to make of Culpepper. Maybe just some residual anger from the Strip Strangler episode?

How in the world are Grissom and Sara going to pull off being a newly married couple now? Should be interesting.

Okay, okay. I'm being patient.

What's up with Culpepper being so excited about what is obviously a tragedy in Grissom's life (his father's life anyway.)

In a way, I hope that this forces Grissom to deal with his demons.

This isn't going well. This is GSR, right?