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Reviews for: This Used to Be My Playground
Danger's Princess
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
That made me cry. Wow, I can barely breathe. That was truly simply and in the simplest defintion FANTASTIC. ;) Notice the almost BC quote lol. Anyway, wow, I'm like gasping for breath right now. That was truly fantabulastic. =] Wow.
deadlykitty
2006-12-01 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really good! To be honest, I wasn't even on fanfiction when I found this, I was searching for the lyrics to this song and others. Its really good, and I've never even read The Breakfast Club. I can figure out what it is about just from your fic, thats a great thing to be able to do. Your a great writer, I'm jealous. I used this song myself in a fruitsbasket fanfic, Fading. Maybe you'd like it? Its interesting when you read fics that share a common theme or whatever, doncha think? Anyway, great story, I really like it alot.
Philipa Aleshre
2006-06-23 . chapter 1
AW! I LOVE THIS! I'M CRYING! T_T IT'S JUST SO BEAUTIFUL AND... AND I DON'T KNOW! I CAN'T STOP CRYING!
I enjoyed this a lot, maybe it isn't written in the most perfect way (redaction isn't too good, I mean, there's something about it that i didn't like completely? but... I don't know, I JUST LOVE IT! Imperfectly perfect hahahaha
gotta go, but gotta tell you once again that this was great! T_T
goodbye! keep writing!
MidnightBlue88
2005-08-11 . chapter 1
This was really good. I liked this: "Claire had all of them, especially John Bender. Allison and Andy were meant to be together forever and Brian was the driving force behind their bond; it worked beautifully." I also liked that Brian read aloud his essay. I can just see Vernon's face, LOL. The end was very good. Poignant, but not too sappy. Nice one shot. You should do more of them.
lazaefair
2005-07-28 . chapter 1
That was pretty good. You balanced the "past" and "present" very well, and the love Claire and John had for each other came through very strongly. And I like how you showed how the high school events continued to affect Claire's life even after she left, and how her feelings for John played a part in her getting married to Brad. Good job.
Whist
2005-07-28 . chapter 1
That was fantastic!! I don't usually like oneshots, but this one is great. Some excellent writing. Good show.
Misha-pepper
2005-07-28 . chapter 1
Maristela, how lovely your ff is! The music fitted perfectly to the text and gave the tone to it... Love it, as usual! ;)
mara-rabb
2005-07-27 . chapter 1
*sigh* I love it. It's sweet, and painful... and I can see it actually happening.
santafelover
2005-07-27 . chapter 1
Hey i really lik! r u going 2 con w/ ur other fic!
Lear's Fool
2005-07-27 . chapter 1
Cute. Very cute. You brought out the better side of the Braekfast Club, and that song really fits well with your story.
TBFF Nat
2005-07-27 . chapter 1
Wow, this was beautifully written. It was so full of emotion and meaning without at any time being over the top or ridiculously sappy. I really enjoyed reading it and it all seemed so real because the reader knows it could so easily have happened. I think you managed to portray the complexity of the characters really well and at the same time show that they have faults without actually coming out and saying it, which I think takes real skill. Great job!
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