Beautiful writing skills, very interesting story... but come on, not even a kiss at the end? You dissapoint me *lol* Great job, I'd definitely like to read more of your stuff!

This is one of very few Wild Arms 3 stories that actually tries to capture the essence of the game. I like your portrayal of all the characters too. Excellent work!

I wonder why other people NEVER review. The utter dislike of a character is no reason to ignore a story. This story has unbelievable potential. And remember, never be intimidated by more experienced authors. It might turn out people they actually know are reviewing their stories a lot more than they need to.

The concept of this story is a breath-taking one. I thank you for honoring the idea of Janus making his come-back.

I want another game based off this story. Dammit, why doesn't Mediavision ever look at fanfic! In other words:

Well done.

The someone who posted before me showed me this (I'm her boyfriend! :P ) and I am VERY amazed!

Honestly I think you should have been on the writing team for Wild Arms 3 rather than the guys who DID write it! I just love the characterization...You portrayed Janus PERFECTLY... makes me idolize him all the more!

and of course...makes Virginia and Janus all the more sweet~! WHy they didn't get together in the game... though not total disappointment...I'm considering this 'fanfic' as the real stuff!

...best WA3 fic I happened to read...!
It made me get up early today just to finish reading..loved it so much,I don`t think I have words to express exactly how much ^_^!
I`m glad its complete since I`ve seen tons of fics which are being abandoned in the middle..
At the same time wish it wasn`t complete!Just so I`ll read more and see how they got to adventure all together!

Anyway..Thank you for a wonderful fic...that oddly enough didn`t feel like a fanfic at all..it was like something that happaned in real after the game..just wonderful ^_^!! Heh it made my day!!

..j-jaw dropping!And I`m in the middle..
Love how you caugh everyone`s personality so well.It is like I`m going through a real sequel or something..
*thumbs up* I should worship you ^_^!

Inspireing. Very nice.. but it should've been longer...it was a very good story. I think I'll consider it a favorite. I found this couple cute already, but this just made me even feel stronger about it. Very nice. *Bows in respect.

I'm normally a major lurker, but I just had to mention what a wonderful story you have here. I loved seeing some IC Wild Arms characters for once, especially Clive (I loved how you got the way he speaks down pat!). I also love the way you handled the ending: sweet and open-ended. The only possible criticism that I can give is that 1) it was too short (but that's only because I liked it so much!) and 2) I wish that you had had a little more background on the inhabitants of Little Twister, or, more specifically, of Janus's life when he lived there. But your story is still a huge breath of fresh air.

Thanks for such a good read!

~Lady Aegis