beautiful.

This is work that qualifies as art.

Amazing, beautifully written, bravo!

WOW. This was amazing. I loved how you captured Kouga and the words you used were just great. Awesome job!

Considering how old this piece is, my only hope is that you still are around to know that you've deeply touched this writer with this lovely bittersweet piece.

*deep bow*


Ronwixziv

Ah, so lovely.

This was so good. Ack. Bittersweet. It captured the tone of his yearning so well. And the way she kept stumbling back to him over the years was... believable. Given the circumstances, that is. And I appreciate how you kept their true feelings intact-- she never really loved him the way he loved her.

I liked this story, much to my surprise. It really goes along well with the idee fixe definition. It almost reminds me of Berlioz Symphony Fantastique with the way Kouga tortures himself, and how Kagome keeps denying- almost to the point of being evil.
So I have to ask, how does it really end? Does she stay and admit what she really feels- what was shining in her eyes? Or does she stubbornly continue on her way?
It bothered me- in a really good way- how I could almost relate to both characters. I think that says a lot for how you tell the story- even with all the time jumps. They're easy to follow. Please keep writing more KougaxKagome fanfics. They're not my typical fav couple, but the way you wrote them kept them relatively close to their anime counterparts. What if you wrote a SesshoumaruxKagome fanfic? maybe not so angsty, but true to their characters. See, I tend to read a lot of those, and sometimes the way some authors portray Sesshoumaru makes me wonder what all he did to give that much away. I think you could do them justice. There are too many "Inuyasha betrays Kagome with Kikyou and so she runs off and bumps into Sesshoumaru" type stories. They also tend to paint Kikyou as a ** or just utterly evil, but Kagome doesn't really think of her that way. She kind of pities her, and obviously knows Inuyasha still has feelings, but Inuyasha doesn't seem stupid either, he knows that he wants to avenge Kikyou, but I don't think he's still in love with her, maybe just in love with the fact that she was one of the first few that cared about him, made him a little more hospitable.
Anyways, I thought that since you did a kick @$$ job at keeping the core quality of Kouga and Kagome, that maybe you would be one to do the same with Sesshoumaru and Kagome.
Just a thought!
Thanks!
Jayde Kattalakis~**~

Heart-wrenchingly beautiful.

wow - you write the most poignant pieces. So beautifully written.

I like this. A lot - it's really good and it's got that catchy line that's so dashing (I must say, 'He'd never wanted to live forever anyways,' is a catchy way to make someone read your fic.

Great work! I enjoyed this very much!

WHAT THE ** IS THIS

ITS VERY CONFUSING

That was so sad and beautiful. Wonderfully written, too. Kouga...he really is in such a sad and touching situation.

I am stunned by the brilliance of this. I think this is the most well-written Kouga-Kagome fic...wait, scratch that, the best Kouga fic, period...that I have ever read.

Kudos.