omg is the title from anna nalick?
kay, maybe not...
but still...:)

i liked it.

Great story! But I believe Fred means it when he says he loves her.

very good. i like how you wrote this one poetically. it wouldnt be as good written just normally.

I love it

after reading this, i've come to the realization that you and i have similar writing styles. :) based on the titles of your stories, i'm assuming that you get a lot of your inspiration from listening to music while writing? and this one from anna nalick's song, breathe ... and the other one titled 'collide' ... it's like i'm reading my own work in a twisted way, but it's different and better. lol anyway, that was a bunch of rambling. well great job on this. it was short, but sweet and emotional. your stories always contain such raw emotions.

aw...thats so sad...very well written...

Your words are beautifully crafted. I love the way you did that. The writing was beyond fantastic.

I've been trying not to read as much fanfic as I used to, because I want to wait for the inevitable HBP-related overload to subside before I become obsessed with fandom again. I wasn't going to read this, but I decided to go for it because at least it was short, and I'm SO glad I did. It's moving and simply beautiful, and although it doesn't fit in with my idea of Fred, I was really touched by it. Great work.

All I can say is that I liked it, but it was sorta short...

O that's good... kinda leaves me with some questions tho...too bad I can't figure out what they are!

Anyway, I liked it...very angsty and romantic (hence the Angst/Romance category)

A short story, a simple plot but ultimately a perfect piece of writing. You convey something which is often very real through this fiction in a really, really good way! Well done! :)

Aww. . .I'm always a sucker for them sad Angelina/Fred fics. Didn't find any fault with this one. It was really pretty =)

I clicked on this and expected it to be garbage once I saw how short it was(no offense), but then I was completely blown away by your poetic capability. Within these few lines I have never felt such emotion. It was amazing. Not to mention the detail was stunning. Nice work. Im very jealous of your talent.

Eruaphadriel

I agree with Jersey Princess. I swear I've read this before! I'm not saying that you copied someone so don't get mad. Simply expressing my thoughts. Anyway I do love this fic. Good Job!