Reviews for Constant Reminders

Reviews For: Constant Reminders

Tinker Ramone 2007-01-11 ch 1,	abuseA wonderfully written portrait of emotions. I loved it. I could picture the moments as discribed, I was there.
Muffin Is Injured 2006-04-13 ch 1,	abuseWow, powerful. Great.
AHigherOctave 2005-11-01 ch 1,	abuseI think I'm happy she said no now, not about the sleeping with Dean, 'cause that'll always suck because she wanted Jess to be her first.
Cinnamon Blossom 2005-08-05 ch 1,	abusethis is a great story, cause is not a happy ending, but is the best ending that this could have, they share a beautiful moment, but it was that and nothing alse, she won`t leave, he won`t stay. it`s better this way, i hated the way gilmore girls ended, it wasn`t what i expected, and that`s not bad, but it wasn`t a good endind, i was asking me..what the hell??...dean wasn`t there till the end..so why rory should sleep with him??...i really enjoy this story
Summer 2005-07-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow, that is just depressing. But I loved the storyline, and the writing is incredible. And I do love Jess/Rory and surprisingly, could have seen this happening just as easily as what happened did
milover 2005-07-31 ch 1,	abusekeep it going
Bittersweetbloodbaby 2005-07-31 ch 1,	abuseA million times better than the Palladino's version.
smile1 2005-07-30 ch 1,	abuseHey, I loved the sad ending this story had to it. It reminded me of a fairytale gone wrong and I was very intrigued by that idea itself so just imagine what the writing itself did to me. Bye, smile :-)
perverse inside 2005-07-29 ch 1,	abuseYou said this wasn't meant to be angsty but... cries-- I loved it. God, it's so incredibly sad, and yet they had 'their time'... I don't know what's worse, have it and lose it or not to have it and be left with inner anger. Nah, I like this end much, much better than ASP's. :P
Clare DeTamble 2005-07-28 ch 1,	abuseI like the overall idea of this story: the tragedy and the realism without the over expression of telenovela-ism. The summary was quite eloquent. This was my favorite part: Her belongings are all boxed, and he wonders what the dorm looked like occupied. He knows that she shared it with Paris. He finds the thought of the two together again, after everything they went through in high school, the betrayal, the hatred, the competition, laughable. Then he remembers his own betrayals. The thought process as well as the meanings left for interpretation were perfect. But (please don't take this personally), I feel as though the true potential of both the idea of the story and the eloquence I know you are capable of was masked with a clutter of a few things. One of which (the most minor) being typographical errors. It may have been an auto-correct setting on your computer. You used a lot of what has almost become like a cliché to Gilmore characterization: Jess being a high school dropout in an Ivy League institution, the description of his being thin, questioning a “hungry Gilmore,” and this phrase: all the things she has spent the past year trying to forget. stuck out at me. Yes, they are appropriate, but they are overused and only skim at the surface of the characters and situations. I’ve read your other stories, and you seem to be more insightful and original within those. This line bothered me: When she wakes up, her fingers are tangled in his new emo hair. The description of his hair as “emo” didn’t seem to fit with the tone of the story; it was less serious. I thought that in a way this was a little bland, in that maybe you could have used more imagery and character descriptions. I have a question: I’ve never The Professor and the Madman, so I’m wondering if there is a connection between the context of the novel and the situation of the characters? I hope I don’t sound patronizing or condescending – I just wanted to offer my opinion in a “constructively critic” way.
someone5 2005-07-27 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful. And tragic. Ah, I love.
me 2005-07-27 ch 1, anon.	abusewow...can't really say anything else
miloaddict 2005-07-27 ch 1,	abuseAww...so sad. But this is how it should have been. This is what would have given them closure. I loved it!
Holly Gilmore 2005-07-27 ch 1,	abuse"For a split-second she considers running it over." Out of all the perfect lines in this fic, that should be my favorite, but it is. It's the one that made me laugh instead of just sitting here with my mouth hanging open. Wow... That was... really, really depressingly wonderful. Can you and Elise teach me to write pretty?

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