hm...I actually needed some time to digest(?) this one. It was depressing but nevertheless well-written. It had an odd effect on me, but it is certainly a good fic!

I'm not even sure how many times I've come back and read this... Too many to count.
It's just... so depressing, but so wonderful at the same time.
And it seems fitting, that when someone completely crushes your soul, that you wish the same hurt upon them. Or maybe that's just me...
Either way, this is one of my all-time favorites, and the line "something had to fill the gap where my soul once was" still gives me chills.

STC2! :( :(: (:(:(

Update :'(

please write more! Good fic!

Very sad little story... not sure how I feel about it. Admittedly, I could see this happening. If Serena had been just a little less in love with Darien, this could very easily happen.

I Liked the Dark Angst of it all how Serenity tells Mamoru the reality of the situation. This does have potential to be an extension. Gosh you've given me inspiration on some Anti Endy/Serena stories. Good Job!

Nice, ver very very nice, continue or i'll send the cookie stealers after you. ^_^

wow that was a bitchy thing to say... I wonder what happened that they broke up? I feel a strange lack of knowledge when i read it. Like it's only part of a whole.

if you ever get the time, keep writing. give us at least hints of the event that occured to pull our favorite pairing so far apart! What about his reaction to her engagement/wedding. We don't get a look or a anguished cry or even a rueful smile?

I loved this! Dark, a little sad, but stupendous non-the less.

(I especially like her ending up with Diamond. I want to read more, please. I know this is a one-shot, but still!)

Very nicely written, interesting metaphor.

Yeah, Yeah, I know it took me a while to find this one hehe. Boy.. Looking at this, then thinking of you're newest story (not stc, the other one) You can see you're reverting back to the old depressing but good, Sword-Chan -sigh- Cross your fingers for me, BI might be going to see two of my favourite bands with Baka and Jase, Ben's going to get tickets today hopefully

OKay, that was strange... Very interesting. It makes you think, and even though I've never been a fan of Usagi/Daimond pairings, this one definitely makes you think about the implications. The dark desire to cause the one you love the same pain you feel... It's a strange trait in people, and its alot more common than some might think. I like this story alot.

This is great I hope Darien see what he lost. plz tell me you are going to make more chapters this could make for a great story.

That was so sad.

Your salad days must have really sucked.

Great story though!

Very... interesting... however, it was a little rushed but i have a feeling that you'll end up expanding on it.