 persephone 4/17/12 . chapter 12 I'll apologize for any mistakes now. I'm reviewing via my phone. And I get ahead of it sometimes.
Anyway... I'd love |
 ShadoweGoddess 4/7/12 . chapter 12So, I did say I'd come and gush later :) Later happened to be after work, lol.
So, I do hope you'll write a sequel. It... This story... Was amazing. It reminds me WHY I love Shinkumi. 3 So, I can't wait to read more from you, hopefully him coming home from Africa, whether she is waiting for him at the airport, seeing him with another women (who happened to be in Africa with them) her misunderstanding something she either sees or hears, or him coming and surprising her at the school, meeting her new students, and causing a ruckus with his presence... I can't wait!
*bounce bounce bounce* |
 perse 4/7/12 . chapter 12 Please write a sequal! I'll fve when I'm on my laptop. But omg, I'm in love. This is one of TBD best written... And ill finish gushing later on my laptop lol |
 A Mistake 6/4/10 . chapter 7Well, on Yankumi's decision to run out, I can't say for certain whether it's OOC or not since I'm more familiar with the mangaverse than dramaverse, but there's more than one way to see it. Seeing as how her feelings have developed so far, it's plausible for her to go out because if she didn't _she might beat the stuffing out of somebody_. She would have enough rage to take down a gang of low-rank thugs. It would have been less running out and more charging out.
I'm more uncertain about whether she would kiss Shin just to get him to be her sparring partner (and out of her own curiosity too, okay). My perspective of her character was someone who took fidelity very seriously. Well, at least she was so in mangaverse. It was the one point where she was not going to defend her student at all if the problem started because he played hooky with someone else's girlfriend (if my memory serves me, I think it was Shin who was the accused).
Other than that, it's a highly engaging and plausible story. I'm sure I'll be enjoying the ride 'till the end. Thanks for writing this (and sharing it too). ;) |
 Hellcat81 2/14/10 . chapter 12great fic! too bad it ended with his departure! btw i really loved his letter where he said that he will always be in the back seat cheering her on. :D thx so much for writing this beautiful fic! |
 Hellcat81 2/14/10 . chapter 11i hope you have a happy ending waiting for me... :S |
 Hellcat81 2/14/10 . chapter 10oh the last sentence was great. :D btw, i think shin should bury his head (while he cries) in her neck or her hair not her chest since he is taller. |
 Hellcat81 2/14/10 . chapter 9wow, that was steamy. :D guess shin is on cloud nine same as yankumi, ne? |
 Hellcat81 2/14/10 . chapter 8poor shin! :D he has to learn a lot if he wants become her husband... |
 Hellcat81 2/14/10 . chapter 7i guess her running out is totally okay for her. i mean in teh manga-verse it's fine. it woudl be ooc for the drama-verse. anyway, either way i like it and it's your fic. |
 Hellcat81 2/14/10 . chapter 6yay, that was great! |
 Hellcat81 2/14/10 . chapter 5i wonder about shinohara's intentions. a necklace? i hope he won't get in shin's way. |
 Hellcat81 2/14/10 . chapter 4hehe, shin seriously knows how to keep yankumi on her toes. :D |
 Hellcat81 2/14/10 . chapter 3oh wow, things move fast. the girl, shinohara, jealousy and now already making up AND out? :S |
 Hellcat81 2/14/10 . chapter 2oh wow, things are definitely getting interesting. i wonder if shin will start looking at other girls as well. :D |