wow...quatre was narrator, right? very good...although, i dunno..something about trowa seemed off center...not sure...maybe i'm just incredibly tired...still very good.

Sure, could have IMed you, but everyone likes reviews, right? And I was so excited to find a real person I actually know posts here on FF.net as well. :) I must confess, my Gundam Wing familiarity is minimal, but your fic is just beautifully written, made me wonder about everything my sister (and source of info, formerly a little Heero/Duo obsessesed) left out of her summaries. It gave me that particular tightness of chest that only really great angst can, and then did a lovely job of resolving it just enough to make me smile. :)

*frowns* Fanfiction.net tells me that you posted this fanfiction sometime in April. *frown deepens* WHY AREN'T THERE MORE FICS! Hehe, you're a talented auther; I enjoyed reading this. Why do you have only one fanfiction posted, you silly, silly author you? I'd love to see more posted up here by you. It would make Dark Hunter veeerryyy happy. Anyway, highlights of this particular (ONLY, grrr) piece of writing: You dialogue, while it was halting (as was intended, given the fact that Trowa was involved), it didn't seem awkward or false in any way. It gives you a sense of reality, the way the words fall and some topics are understood without being breached. There are enough details to add a richness to everything between the words that really matter. WRIIIITE MORE! Or I may have to hunt you down and prehaps slay you. Let me know when/if you put something new up! Pleasies! My e-mail is . I'd put you on that author alert thing to save time and energy, but I don't honestly know how to use the daft thing.

*goggles* That was most excellent. I always knew Quatre was eloquent (gods I hope it is him nararrating and I'm not seriously embarrassing myself here O_o), but your take on his relationships, inner thoughts, and most importantly, his doubts, is exactly what I meant him to be, but never explored. You seem to have an empathy with your readers. I followed that whole fic with a reassured smile on my face because you had it so dead on. For both he and Trowa. If you intend to write more soon, I will most assuredly gobble it up. _ And if you decide to write about the Turks, then I will have to seek you out further and procure your creation for my own eveil purposes. Idiocy aside, (very hard for me _) I'm really looking forward to more by you. You have a very satisfying flow to your stories.

ooh! I liked that story , its so...nice...i can't think of a word...it's just so...NICE.

O wow, that was great! *grins* So kawaii!