This story was pretty good.

Hi! It's me, Black5Belt. I'm sure you've heard of me somewhere...yes? no? oh well. Anyway, I really liked your story! Normally longer stories like this bore me, but I read the whole thing really interested, so good work! :D

Excellent story, I loved every second of it! Xiaoyin ROCK! You should defiately write more Xiaoyin, seeing as you're really good at it and I definately liked this fanfic...yup, I liked it so much I just happened to put it on my favorite stories list. I wonder if you'll make a sequel to it as well, I already have a few ideas in my head that could extend the plot further, but I really need to concentrate now on finally making my own fanfic and stop acting so retarded :P

Looking forward to seeing more fanfics of yours...

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that is such a freakin awsome story!! man you sould make another one. I LOVE IT TO DEATH !! thank you for putting so much effort into it. Sorry no offense but i noticed some incorect spelling and sentences that didn't make sense, but any way, freakin awsome story!!

You are KICKASS!
Great story! :-)

In all the fanfictions I have ever read...that was the best one yet. I almost cried man. I like the way you shifted the story. One of my favorite parts was when Jin visits Kazuya.
"If you love her...go and get her" -Kazuya Mishima

Damn that was a good one.

:BOWS: U are my new hero! GO AHEAD TELL THEM!

hey hey hey

cute ending...youre really a good author
keep on writing!

i-like-the-color-blue
a.k.a. cinnamon

Wohoo! The ending was so lovable! It was funny too and kinda embarassing for Jin. I guess it's not too hard for a boy to write romance eh? I guess so too. Anyways, got to go and fix my **-head, ** and useless computer monitor and buy myself a flat screen LCD monitor! See ya!

I know that I'm getting on your nerves with my reviews and all I'm doing is telling the truth.

This is getting a little bit better. But it was a little lame and your grammer REALLY is BAD in this one. So try harder on it.

*claps* congratulations!! it's finished!

you're story has a nice ending.

i laughed hard when Jin punched Dan in front of the altar and in front of the whole crowd.

is that really the appropriate thing to do if you object a marriage??

hope that you'll have more stories like this one!

Well ovrall it's good. But not as good as your others. Anywayz...I feel in love with it at first then got me off on the Miharu thing >

irine(or w/e your name is) if you just say, "it sux" don't review, if it could be better, describe what could be better kindly. anyway, time for my review; i loved it,great ending to a great story! maybe a sequel?

ok listen all you dmn haters at there. you think that insulting me makes me feel bad...hell no. it makes me get more confident because i know that i am good. irine your probably hate the story maybe cause uhh you hate the pairings or maybe you just hating how many reviews i got. i don't see you writing a story maybe because you can't write a better story than meand your 3 year old cousin...you think he can...HA...he can't. this is message to you and all you haters out there. if you don't like me or how much good writer or hate the pairing and i'm gonna say it again.

DON'T READ MY STORIES DUMBASSES!

wow that was cool your a great auther a great ending too