i loved this story, pleases please continue it or do a sequal. Please!! i'll pout and cry if it will get you to continue!

I absolutely love this story! :)
Hope you update soon! :)

Hello. I miss this story. I hope you update soon

O_O wow... um... wowo... I loev the story but... TBC? TBC? why didn't anyone tell me about THAT one?

Like mother like daughter. The men in their lives are so in tune with them, that they know about the pregnancies first!

I love Gil talking to Hannah, telling her to wait to be born. Also, loving the paralels of the now grown Hannah & the beginnings of GSR!

It's so hard to write a review--there is so much to comment on!

I loved the phone call/argument between Sara & her mother! It was so perfect that she just went off on a rant & didn't even realize that she called Gil her HUSBAND! AND, even better that he didn't miss the slip & mentioned it! That should be interesting!

The interaction between the mother's was fantastic!! They are so different, yet still both on the same page! Their rapport was terrific!

I love the flasbacks & it was so sweet that Gil sent Sara a birthday present! So sweet!!

WOW! This chapter was jam-packed! From Gil & his mother...finding out about Sara & the baby (loved the line :“That would be nice, dear, but I don’t think I’ll fit in a crib.”)

Then the Brass-Gil banter ending with:


“I have great hair. I don’t need to primp every hour of the day.”



then Gil wathcing the interaction between his daughter & her professor! Like he was watching Sara all over again!

Now, I loved Gil's 'story', but the "TEXTING" was hysterical!

Oh, I love Hannah's 'PalindromeOne"...

I like the take on Sara's mother in this story!

I love this Grissom Family!!

I love the way you are intertwining the 'present' with the 'future' telling this story via Gil & Sara telling their chldren stories!! What a fun story!

I could almost feel Gil having a panic attack thinking about the cost of his girls!

Awesome twist to how they got together!

That is quite a rollercoaster ride! I am looking forward to read more.

Oh my gosh! You have to finish this. Please, please, please. I'll pay you. Just one more chapter? Please?

I knew this wasn't finished and usually that doesn't bug me so much, so I decided to read it anyway. But now I'm completely caught up in the story and what's going to happen with Hannah and Micah.

By the way, that's totally wierd because I usually don't get into original characters that much. Just Gris and Sara. This has just been really great. And I love all the characters and what you've done with them (except poor Noah and seeing his parents doing the dirty; I myself am still convinced the stork dropped me on my parents' doorstep).

Ok, I won't beg any more. I know that real life is more important than fanfic and sometimes the pen goes dry, blah, blah, blah. But it would be awesome if you could finish this. Maybe (happily) wrap up the Hannah and Micah bit and add a little more GSR. But like I said, if not, that's cool too. The story still rocks.