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| Reviews for The Tragedy of Daine and Numair |
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   Silver eyed lass 5/19/13 . chapter 1im really sad now. |
| Lukara Tachibana 6/17/11 . chapter 1 It was so touching... I hate you... I rarely get moist eyes from fanfiction. |
| angeliggy 8/5/10 . chapter 1 AWW that was soo sad and yet so fantastic! You wrote it so well, it felt like I was Numair, and later, Daine. Daine was so out of character, at the beginning but...it fit. And this is going to sound horrible, but...I think that you should have made Daine on Numair in her own free will. It would have been sadder and better, in my opinion. The whole demon-taking-over-thing was a little far-fetched... And it was sad that Numair died of a broken heart, but it was better than if Numair had lived, by far. It adds emotions and twists to the story that engage the reader in a fantastic way. All in all, THIS WAS AWESOME! Well done :) |
| b 10/24/09 . chapter 1 oh my well that was heartbreaking i think i gonna cry seriously |
| Aquamarinelightnight 9/1/09 . chapter 1 oh MY GOD THAT IS SO AWESOMEFUL MUST RIGHT MORE |
| FloWerGlow12 5/2/09 . chapter 1 How could you kill Numair!Im sorry but that was simply awful. The story was well written but i really dont like your idea. |
| penelope pitstop04 8/22/08 . chapter 1 Really well written story, but so sad. How could you kill Numair? |
| FairCritic 8/28/07 . chapter 1 That's just AWFUL. I mean, it's very well written, but the story itself, it's just horrible. Romeo and Juliet at least died together, and knowing they loved each other. |
| Celtic-Dragon-89 6/18/07 . chapter 1 that is really sad! Wriet On! Celtic-Dragon-89 |
| bellatrixmagic 5/13/06 . chapter 1 It was great. Why did you let Numair die though? Do you hate him? |
| Mangled Daisy 1/27/06 . chapter 1 Oh my gosh. That was sad. But it was so...cleverly written! |
| Serpentira 1/14/06 . chapter 1 How sad. Weird things can happen in dreams, that one was obviously no exception. Neat idea though, even if it is a sad story. |
| Brindle 1/12/06 . chapter 1 i love this story! it is so sad. *crying* anyway, you described numair's emotions very well. great job |
| OneChuThree 1/7/06 . chapter 1 Aww...so sad I cried...;_; I did like it though. It was marvelous. And...hm, well, while I'm at it I'll just comment on all your stories as well. I thought that all of them were really good, most (if not all) made me cry. Yes, I'm pretty sentimental. Er A on all of them D *added to favorites* |
| Felander 12/13/05 . chapter 1 Numair dying of malnourishment in his study? I really had to laugh out loud, when I read that. This story is much more fun than tragic. Sorry, though. |
