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| LovesFantasy 2007-10-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseSo... HI!! Hope life is treating you well! Saw that you'd updated a story and got so excited, I had to ignore my work and rush off right away to read it... Enjoyed this chapter a great deal. I like your version of Pansy and Neville (though it's not a pair I generally read). While very sweet and romantic, I was a little let down when Neville revealed his reasons for leaving Pansy. It seemed that there was going to be more to it - a secret job, an illness, or something. Regardless, I was glad to see them... make up... ;o) As for my OTP: I was a little surprised at Ginny through Pansy's eyes. Is she really drinking that much? Pansy gave the impression that she could out drink the fishes...! Otherwise, your descriptions of her are lovely; she radiates elegance. I can't wait to see how you bring Milli and Blaise into the story, though selfishly, I'd like another chapter dedicated to Draco demanding compliance from Ginny (you know, telling her family and making an 'honest' man out of him - lol!). At any rate, I do hope that life is going well for you. It’s been so long since we’ve chatted; we’ll have to remedy that soon! |
| thedevilsdesire 2005-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseholy crap this is one of the best stories i think i have ever read brilliant! update quickly!HURRY |
| Damia - Queen of the Gypsi'... 2005-07-28 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome first chapter. I hope that that is what we can expect from future chapters as well. Passion strength and bitterness. Write more soon. - Damia - |
| meeaz 2005-07-27 ch 1, | abusethis is such an amazing start to this story-i loved every single bit of it. just awesome! more soon, please! xoxo, meeaz. |