|Reviews for Changes of the Sword|
| JWG 7/6/12 . chapter 1
Reading from the back of the list. OOC, but I think the author achieved his intent.
| Kurt Baros aka The Falcon 11/11/09 . chapter 1
wow this ones pretty deep but a litle morbid but none the same
| Cauli 6/10/04 . chapter 1
Oh this story was just so touching. You did an excellent job of portraying him as something other thanstupid and annoying.
| Monou Hakkai 4/14/04 . chapter 1
oh lord, this truly is a moving piece of Kuno fiction. I admit I have a minature soft spot for this guy deep inside. It's rather strange to say such a thing, ne? I have to say the POV writing makes Kuno sound a great deal human. I feel this story makes the reader sympathise with him a great deal. You did a good job at writing this first person story, especially when it is about someone bizarre like Kuno Tatewaki.
| Alcnolien 3/4/04 . chapter 1
Wow... that was really deep...
Cool! That was cool... yeah...
I can't describe it besides that this is a moving piece of literature... amazing...
AUGH! EMOTIONS! TENSION! ITS ALL TOO MUCH!
I'll add you to my favorite authors list, that was so cool...
| Ghost 1/10/03 . chapter 1
Not bad, but I didn't like the ending. Call me cold-hearted, but in my opinion suicidals are gutless cowards. There is *always* hope! And somehow Kuno doesn't strike me as a person who would commit seppuko, no matter how much he usually goes on about his honour.
Anyway, minor nitpick. You wrote:
"No man is, but I more than others."
Surely you mean *less* then others?
But all in all, it was well-written and moving, though way too depressive for my taste.
| Chibikat the Canuck 2/16/02 . chapter 1
Oh. My. GOD. Why didn't I review this before? This was so well written and amazing; I love it, and I really did almost cry at the end. Poor Tatewaki never did get a break, did he? And committing seppuku. . . the poor guy. *sniff* You have a good handle on the characters, that's easy to see; please continue writing, I'll always continue reading. -Chibikat
| Schmidtasuki 12/15/01 . chapter 1
that sure was some angsty stuff *sniff* really good though