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Darken-che-chan
2009-04-03 . chapter 20
I love this story so much! I found it a few years ago and decided to find it again and see if there was anymore.
It saddens me that the last time it was updated was about 2-3 years ago. :C

So many people would love for this story to be continued! It's one of the best CatCF fanfictions on ! Please continue?
estrellaSMC
2008-09-16 . chapter 1
I just want you to know this fic inspired me. I made the following movie:

h t t p : / / w w w . y o u t u b e . c o m / w a t c h ? v = O Q g N 4 5 X P M A g

(you'll have to take out the spaces. I had to do that in order for it to work)

using a song that I thought of once while reading this fic and ever since became the song that, in my mind, became a song that expresses their relationship. I thought I'd share it with you since this fic was the original inspiration for it.
Nanami XIV
2008-07-05 . chapter 20
I love this sory SO much! 8) I really really hope you'll update it. I'm hooked on it (and have been for awhile) This has to be my #1 fav out of all the fanfics I've read.
Orange Snap
2008-05-13 . chapter 20
HURRY HURRY HURRY! I need more or i will die!
DracieMissKitty
2008-04-21 . chapter 2
Miss Kitty: This is a really good story it would be a HUGE crying shame if it doesn't finesh
DracieMissKitty
2008-04-20 . chapter 20
Miss Kitty: Oh do please Update again soon I'd like to hear more on Willy and Charlie's Big bother little bother relationship!
DracieMissKitty
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
Miss Kitty: Wow this fic has been done so well I do hope you'll update more of this fic
Owl Alkanesof
2008-04-19 . chapter 20
I love this, you know for the tv show things you should have the lady/guy ask him a few questions then have wonka take over the conversation going on rants about snozzwangers etc. and the lady trying to follow what he's saying in a futile attempt.
Alana-kittychan
2008-04-14 . chapter 20
Alana: Wow we've both change lol I spend more my time doing art stuff and being on DA So gald your still updating this fic I missed reading it!

Page: Keep up the good work

EvO: meh
Estrella
2008-01-26 . chapter 20
Great job on the story so far. I hope this isn't one of the stories that you're going to never finish. Even if it is, I hope you'll let me know.

I also don't know if you take ideas from your readers, but I had an idea. I heard a song recently that I thought fit pretty well in the idea of this story. Here are the words, edited to fit the situation:

Courage, brothers,
You do not walk alone
We will walk with you
And sing your spirits home

Courage, Willy,
You do not walk alone
We will walk with you
And sing your spirit home

Courage, Charlie,
You do not walk alone
We will walk with you
And sing your spirit home

Courage, brothers,
You do not walk alone
We will walk with you
And sing your spirits home

I had the idea that either Willy has a flashback of the oompa-loompas singing this to him and Charlie before they left, or the oompa-loompas call the hotel and sing it to them over the speaker phone. You can do it either way, or not use my idea. I just thought I'd tell it to you and see what you thought.
IDOL HANDS
2007-01-16 . chapter 20
My time is more limited now, it took me three tries to completely get through your chapter but I'm delighted to see that you decided to try and continue. Your Willy is still very much in character and it was a pleasure to see the relationship you've constructed between he and Charlie playing itself out again. The reporter seen was handled very nicely.
RandomGuy
2007-01-01 . chapter 1
Pure and wonderous. It has me speechless. Amazing.
BrokenForTheOrdinary
2006-12-25 . chapter 19
Amazingly well written, you had me hooked since the beginning. Had it not been Christmas I would have read it all in one day! You capture their characters brillantly, and while making it interesting, you do not take the whole "Wonka atmosphere" to an unbelievable level. Well, I guess I should say you do very well at keeping them in character.
Keep with it! I can hardly wait until the next segment... xD
Oh, and I love your number-grams (whatever their called) - Candy, absolutely brillant.

Ashley
Isayssoccer
2006-12-25 . chapter 20
I couldn't believe it when I checked my email. The words "Alert" and "Brother" caught my eye and I whispered "No way."
But you really did update! I have been waiting FOREVER for this chapter (At least it feels like it), and I have kept checking back out of some small hope that maybe I forgot to put this story on my alert list.
Anyways, awesome job on your twentieth chapter! I really (REALLY, REALLY), hope to read more in the near future!
fxkoala
2006-12-24 . chapter 20
Sque! This is the bestest prezzie - a new chapter of one of my favorite CatCF fics! *hugs* I like the rewrite, though poor Charlie and Willy can't seem to catch a break. I hate to think how those 'reporters' may twist their words around. :( It sounds like Charlie and Willy had fun with the dressing up. Good thing that Charlie enjoyed it otherwise Willy would have been mad at himself for his 'revenge'. I enjoyed the visit to the Wonka Shop, though it just makes me want to visit myself. A pity we can't do that in Real Life! I want to sample all of Willy's chocolate bars! Charlie is going to have fun learning all of the flavors I think. Thank you so much for updating! You made my bad day (problems at work :-P) into a good one! Thanks again!
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