Very nice. Although I have to correct you with some stuff.

1.Pakku,not Tupilek,taught Katara and Aang waterbending.
2.Zuko's sister name is AZULA,not Zula.

Yeah that's about it.
I love your stories!
It is as good(if not better)as the series!

Keep it up!

-Sotwt-

This is so AWESOME ! plz keep writing and update soon!

Wow. That was really good. I liked it. The descriptions in this story are TERRIFIC! I loved them. So in-detail. No constructive criticism. Not that you need any. This story is turning out to be one of my more favored. I'm adding this story to not only my fave list, but also my alert list. Gotta keep track of my fave stories!

Raaon Teisha (:)

Wow, wish I could say more than just 'your story rocks out loud' but my mom is yelling at me to get off the computer. I'll review fully after I finish all of, what did you call it, Book of Earth? See ya!

Raaon Teisha (:)

(adds story to fave list)

I absolutely love your Episodes, often moe than the ones on Nick. I cannot wait for the next chapter or episode.

I love your story and this chapter…will be waiting for another update!... keep up the great work! Can’t wait!

This is a really good story! Can't wait til the next chapter!

Hey, I LOVE your story. ALOT! None of the characters are OOC. Well, the only thing that was a TINY bit awkward was when Aang challenged Zuko to an Agni Kai. Frankly, I don't think Aang is QUITE that aggresive. But I still love your story.
Also, I have a song that almost perfectly fits Katara and Zuko's relationship in this story. It's called "When the Wrong One Loves You Right" by Celine Dion. Well, Zuko's not exactly the wrong one, but...

I don't care what they think
How they feel, or what they say
You're everything, I never knew
I always wanted, baby
I've been warned so many times
They tell me I've ignored the signs
But nobody knows you like I do
The only one for me is you
CHORUS:
I can't stop, can't fight, can't resist it
When the wrong one loves you right
OhOhOhOh, yeah
Can't run, can't hide, can't say no
When the wrong one loves you right
OhOhOhOh
When the wrong one loves you right

I'm getting tired
Of hearing that you're dangerous
But they won't stop
Until I leave, they won't believe
That being with you won't break my heart
So worried 'bout the road ahead
They can't see that you're my best friend
They're never gonna take me away from you
There's nothing they can do
(chorus)
How can I walk away
When the feeling's so strong
I know you're where I belong
They say I let my heart
Make up my mind
That's why I'll never say goodbye
I'll never say goodbye
(chorus until end)

Pretty cool, huh?
Well, keep writing! I can't wait until chapter 4!

great! i like...so, when will you update? im so into it now...

i love katara and zuko...

but since im a sucker for happy endings, find someone for aang!!

lol, i really think youre a great author. keep it up!

this story is so awesome! great job so far! keep on writing!

this story is awesome. i really don't read that many fan ficts that i like, but ur's rocked! keep on writing!!

yay! i love Katara's new hair! at first i was like, umm, but then i was like, okay. One of the things is though, that Zuko and Zula both have black hair - not chestnut or brown. And I used Zula too in my fanfic! (But after you, but before i read your story. I made her younger than Zuko.) Only a week til Avatar!!

(PS - I wasn't trying to get you to read my story. It's a KaptureKatara *insert weak laughter here*. I was just noting the similarities.)

I'm am actually hyperventilating, reading this stuff you wrote from the Asmizine whatever thingie. I knew about Zula and Jun (the bounty hunter) and all that stuff, though i think jun is supposed to be younger than Zuko, but KATARA DEVELOPS A NEW POWER?!?!?!?!?!?! Ah! I'm so excited, i can't breathe!

(I was wondering when Nilak would be "paired" with Katara in this story.) Ugh. I can't remember what else i was going to say.

Oh my god. I LOVE scallion pancakes! I go to this place - Tian Fu - and it's like the only place in the world that serves them (as far as I can find). They're so good. I'm totally ordering chinese tomorrow. Um, yes, well... I had something else to say... here, let me scroll back up the story... (i totally knew about Iroh and Tupilek)... Oh yeah! You called Zuko a prude at one point b/c he didn't want to see his uncle naked, but I don't either! i don't want to see Iroh OR one of my uncles naked. EVER. But I'm not a prude for it. And i don't think Zuko is either.

Oh my god. I was so scared during this chapter. i was like, ah! Aang! No! Zuko! No! Sokka! Stop Lauging!

It was good. (Like Tian Fu.)

Where does all your creativity come from? It's like a never ending fountain! Which is good, because with Sept 23 drawing ever closer, I need all the fixes I can get.

Nilak = LOVE.
Zula = Evil. SEXY evil.
Katara = Magic Hair! XD
Sedna = I'm glad you brought her back. She has so much personality!

I can't wait to see what you're going to the with everyone, ESPECIALLY Jun!

Keep up the teh awesome work!