update soon y would ryo cheat on rika u should have put dat rika and t.k. finds somebody else and in the end they get together nut its ur story and update soon

wow... great horror story... hope you can update soon...

I really hope there is more Ryo and Rika action. Thank you for updating the Ryukis.

OH MY ** GOD THIS STORY IS LIKE SO AWSOME I LOVE IT YOU MUSH UPDATE ASAP! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! OMFG OMFG UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Now..that was GREAT..KEEP IT UP.

0_0;;
omg you have GOT to update..

Damndable cliffhangers. Always leaves people craving more, which is good.

Anyway, I figured TK would attempt to kill Ryo and Ryo wouldn't fight back. Or at least that's what usually happens in those situations. Great Chapter(s). I can't wait for you to get back so I can read more.

Oh and have fun in Japan.

Man, I thought you were like, dead or something. I was a little worried. But that's not the point behind this review.

OMG! Ryo and Kari...they should've known better. And now everything is going to go downhill from here with the 4 of them...at least that's the predictable outcome. I look forward to the next chapter.

0_0...zomgosh...update ASAP!! ^^

WOW! THE LAST PART REALLY SHOCK ME! IT WAS GOOD.!

love this story and NTADBLTS this story rocks u must updtae son *adds story and you to fav.*

no how can ryo do that to rika how can kari do that to tk how can you not have the next chap. up ths is a **en good story man! and I LOVE RYO TO!

WOW!Ryo cheatin on Rika!!I feel sorry for Rika!!I LOVE STORY LINE!!KEEP CONTINUING!!

Thank you all for your words:-D
But Ryo and Kari is kind of a filler I guess, Ryo can’t really get Rika so he goes for second best, and more available Kari. Who is also very emotionally needy, there are a lot of events in the next chapter, the chapter which is probably the start of most of the story. So If you thought this has been good, your dreaming! Prepared to get SCARED!
RPG King- Thank you! Your Sister must have good taste.
AzNAnGeL07- No, nothing between T.K. or Rika. Sorry
grilledXcheeseXsandwich- This cheating thing wont be going on for much longer, it really cant. We need to move a side with all this love and **, and get right onto the main story. Which, will have some of you ** your pants.
>_< I almost did… in the dark… XD
Okay well keep reading
Scanerryo (the other writer)

Always knew Ryo had a bad boy side. It makes him more, in the words of my 'sister', shmexah.