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fanficfan1037
2007-11-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseAlright! Hermione's daydream reflects how ** she was! Damn good story!
Silver Weasley
2006-12-29
ch 1,
abuseand yes, hermione's was just as brilliant as ron's.

"‘Don’t call me that, you stupid bint!’ Ron snarled. ‘I hate it, it’s embarrassing! And by the way, you’re a horrible kisser!’

‘No!’ Lavender wailed, stomping her feet and clutching at tufts of her hair (there were now some bald spots on her scalp)."

hahahaha that was the best part in there, and i also rather enjoyed ron eagerly working with the house elves. poor hermione...broken hearts are the worst.

excellent characterization, and excellent story.
-the-coconut-bubble-
2006-12-28
ch 1,
abuseVery nice. Though I wonder what would happen if Fred and George decided to track whatever was going on in those daydreams..
Jubileyn
2006-06-26
ch 1,
abuseThis was funny and cutesy. It was a pleasure to read; fantastic job! XD
risefromtheashes
2006-06-22
ch 1,
abuseHeehee this was awesomely funny! Wonderful!
PutMoneyInThyPurse
2006-05-19
ch 1,
abuseOh, that was *funny* as well as delicious! It's amazing how I'm smiling right now. I love the daydream, and you transported us with Hermione out of her brooding into the funny, naughty daydream... And I'm heading right off for the uncensored version, I want to see if she really did give him that spanking!

But naughtiness aside, the "first real giggle in a long time" is just right. The slightly over-the-top nature of the daydream is - well, you've captured the embarrassing nature of the daydreams that so many of us DO have, haven't you? Psychologically accurate and beyond perfect.

Ooh, delicious. You were recced to me by a fellow-author and I am going to thank her PROFOUNDLY

*fangirls you*
tamela
2006-04-08
ch 1, anon.
abusethat is amazingly awesome
just a bit of love for ya
ForgetFairyTales
2006-02-25
ch 1,
abusewow that was really good!
kiss-of-cuteness
2006-02-12
ch 1,
abuseThat was so cute. I loved Hermione's fantasy
Possum132
2005-11-13
ch 1,
abuseLovely, what an excellent match to your Ron story.
SugarQuill Cutie
2005-11-04
ch 1,
abusehee hee@ so ridulously funny! nice job! mad, passionate love!
Waltz Alone
2005-10-29
ch 1,
abuseteehee!
naughty girl... loved it!
bbyluv
2005-10-14
ch 1,
abuseyo homes this was definantly sum real magic i like the spin ur puttin on things g stay up on tha game
wendy butler-henderson
2005-10-09
ch 1, anon.
abusethat was a cute story, i really enjoyed it.
thanx
lbfan
2005-10-05
ch 1,
abuseVery well done. I enjoy how you pull so much detail out from the story.

It's a daydream, have him quote Shakespeare to her.

You are an inspiration to my own work. I appreciate the drama and romance you work into your stories.

You're full length stories were the first of their kind in fanfiction that I have read. Since then I have read better stories, but I still choose to honor you with my alias name.
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