Damn straight on the extraordinary magic part. I love how it's not just all sex and has so much... "hermione-ishness" in it.

So the real question is... where can I get one??

Funny idea and I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for writing.

Alright! Hermione's daydream reflects how ** she was! Damn good story!

and yes, hermione's was just as brilliant as ron's.

"‘Don’t call me that, you stupid bint!’ Ron snarled. ‘I hate it, it’s embarrassing! And by the way, you’re a horrible kisser!’

‘No!’ Lavender wailed, stomping her feet and clutching at tufts of her hair (there were now some bald spots on her scalp)."

hahahaha that was the best part in there, and i also rather enjoyed ron eagerly working with the house elves. poor hermione...broken hearts are the worst.

excellent characterization, and excellent story.

Very nice. Though I wonder what would happen if Fred and George decided to track whatever was going on in those daydreams..

This was funny and cutesy. It was a pleasure to read; fantastic job! XD

Heehee this was awesomely funny! Wonderful!

Oh, that was *funny* as well as delicious! It's amazing how I'm smiling right now. I love the daydream, and you transported us with Hermione out of her brooding into the funny, naughty daydream... And I'm heading right off for the uncensored version, I want to see if she really did give him that spanking!

But naughtiness aside, the "first real giggle in a long time" is just right. The slightly over-the-top nature of the daydream is - well, you've captured the embarrassing nature of the daydreams that so many of us DO have, haven't you? Psychologically accurate and beyond perfect.

Ooh, delicious. You were recced to me by a fellow-author and I am going to thank her PROFOUNDLY

*fangirls you*

that is amazingly awesome
just a bit of love for ya

wow that was really good!

That was so cute. I loved Hermione's fantasy

Lovely, what an excellent match to your Ron story.

hee hee@ so ridulously funny! nice job! mad, passionate love!

teehee!
naughty girl... loved it!

yo homes this was definantly sum real magic i like the spin ur puttin on things g stay up on tha game