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yay
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
yay yay yay yay!go ron/hermione! it took forever for them to kiss, and when they do it, its in the middle of the freakin' war!?!?!?!?
yangatheart
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
Hey! i am a big fan of the Harry Potter books, so i was very pleased to see how well written this was. I thought your characters were very true to form of the ones we see in the books and films. So often is the case when reading fanfic, that you cant really relate well to the characters because they dont resemble the ones originally written by the author. Thanks!! Will be reading the rest of your work. Keep it up.
emmadactryl
2009-05-11 . chapter 1
Amazing. Utterly amazing. Definitely going on my favourites list. Superbly written, everyone was in character... Wow :D
Wotcher-Tonks
2008-06-30 . chapter 1
this was wonderful and I am adding it to my C2, you know. everyone was perfectly in character!
mar
2008-03-04 . chapter 1
OH I LOVE IT
I REALLY LOVE IT
I DON'T SPEAK ENGLISH SO MUCH BUT I READ VERY GOOD.
unique.normality
2008-01-04 . chapter 1
That's great!
awesome, wonderful writing, great detail, characters acting like they should...
sorry
I'm running out of adjectives to describe this vantastic (woo! another) story
ProtegoNox
2007-05-31 . chapter 1
I loved the interaction between Ron and Hermione (despite the major cry fests, but can those honestly be avoided? I tend to think not) and how you portrayed Lavender as a human being, instead of a female dog, no matter how annoyingly human she is. ;)
Leesa
2007-01-08 . chapter 1
I was smiling the entire time I was reading this!! I felt like Hermione at the end of the story: giddy and giggely. I loved this story.
Silver Weasley
2006-12-29 . chapter 1
i liked this one very much.

it was very believable, and your characterization is, once again, phenomenal.

another favorite!
Molly
2006-08-22 . chapter 1
I simply can't articulate how perfect this was. And it wasn't just the excellent writing, or the unhurried pace, or the fact that everyone was perfectly in character and came off at exactly the right age. It was so believable and it gave me that giddy feeling like I was the one in love. Just what one looks for in a Ron/Hermione fic. I love your Ron. Hug him for me.
HomeSpunLove37
2006-07-30 . chapter 1
That was so cute! I loved it! It's fun finding out what could have happened with them cause you never got to see. I think the books should be focused on them instead of Harry...
PutMoneyInThyPurse
2006-05-19 . chapter 1
I, too, am giddy after this. Love the touches of humour among the romance, and the writing is lovely, sometimes I get dizzy with the way you pile adjectives up "...giddy. Elated." to provide a wonderful effect! The characters' voices are very accurate, too, and the whole story just sweeps you up into the weightless feeling of this particular kind of love. I like Ginny. And, I LOVE HErmione's "courting ritual" statement, the way Ron says it in his own way and she says it, more accurately, in hers, it's such a great bit, showing the contrasst between their characters and yet theat they're on the same page. That was a masterful bit or writing.
EmeraldShadows
2006-03-30 . chapter 1
GREAT one shot! Perfectly portrayed emotions!
Twinsmom
2006-03-17 . chapter 1
This was so perfect. You have the characters in character. Absolutely loved it! I must go and read some more of your stuff now.

Christy
kiss-of-cuteness
2006-02-12 . chapter 1
I loved it. The one shots are great, the whole tension betweent hem was awesome.
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